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11/4/24, 2:08 PM
It might be in vain, but I'm up for Oliver protesting. Remy is getting on my nerve and someone should teach him a lesson. Maybe make him a himbo daddy.

Anonymous
11/4/24, 4:59 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Cosigned, actively rooting against him haha

Anonymous
11/9/24, 10:41 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Seconded!
11/9/24, 10:39 PM
Another great update. Hot mind break sex scene. Looking forward for the next chapter.
11/9/24, 7:40 PM
This hit some good notes hahahaha. Great stuff.
11/8/24, 5:39 PM
Ooh now the whole frat is now gay. And the girls are going to war. I wonder whats gonna happen next.

Anonymous
11/9/24, 7:10 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) The cliffhanger is so interesting and it’s so refreshing a story on this site is truly so up in the air what happens
11/9/24, 6:37 PM
Overall a nice hot quick story, but could have used a little more detail on what the couriers suit looked like that he wanted added to his, and how much of his head face and body ended up covered by the suit in the end
11/9/24, 6:11 PM
Hot story! The way the fantasy and reality blend in such a way that it's more the fantasy foretelling reality, rather than finding himself trapped in a story/fantasy, is very hot. And so is his fate as a rubber polo drone, at first I thought maybe the golden footie boys were the ones in charge of the drones but love that they ended up converted instead

11/9/24, 6:34 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) I'm really glad you like it! The inspiration hit me really hard and I just HAD to write it.
Goon
10/17/24, 2:03 PM
Great story. Loved the boy getting in on the action. Stroked for hours rereading.

11/9/24, 6:19 PM
@Goon Thanks G! Glad you enjoyed it.
11/9/24, 6:10 PM
With the original author's approval, the following is a potential next chapter written by me, linked here for east access (https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/10010813)

11/9/24, 6:16 PM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) 👍👍👍👍
11/9/24, 6:11 PM
Here is the original story's link to make finding it easier for people: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010438 [What’s Up Superman (Sup’s Suppository) ](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010438)
Zander
11/4/24, 3:00 PM
I wouldn't call this chapter an alternative ending because nothing changes in the plot at all and nothing, everything is the same as in the original ending. I would call it an epilogue (continuation)...

11/4/24, 5:45 PM
@Zander No, I’d have to respectfully disagree. I think it’s an alternate epilogue. However, in the end isn’t its label.. like the old classic…a case of PoTAto or PotAto.🤔😉

Zander
11/9/24, 3:29 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) There is no significant difference. There is such a saying that the sum does not change from the rearrangement of the terms) in the chapter (this story) the same. There is no difference at all. Dr. Kumar defeated Batman and other heroes and remained so, they just showed Batman's humiliation in front of Gotham. I'm not saying that the story is bad, I liked it very much) because it is written like in dark erotica. But this does not cancel the fact that nothing has changed in the plot and characters. Personally, I see it that way. Your Original story also ended, where Dr. Kumar won and the heroes became slaves. Therefore, I do not see any special changes and the chapter looks more like an Epilogue.

11/9/24, 6:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Hi. I wrote this chapter. You're not wrong, I'm calling it an alternate ending since I showed it to @Kyle Cicero and he wanted me to submit it as my own story, so since these aren't all the words and ideas of the original author, I'm using the word 'Alternate' (that way, if Kyle wanted to go a different direction some day, he's free to include or ignore this chapter). I'd be thrilled if you read it after the original story and think of it as an epilogue. Thank you for reading!