Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/23/19, 11:43 AM
Great story! A writer's note: you switch here between past and present. This is one thing that tends to take me out of the story because I have to keep adjusting my frame of reference (take this with a grain of salt, however; it might just be something that bothers me and no one else). Otherwise, super hot! Keep writing!
UchihaDEMS
5/23/19, 5:50 AM
Welp, kinda sad its him wanting to bottom for the daddy but don't worry about it. Its amazing non the less.
Anonymous
5/23/19, 5:28 AM
Touchstone can you be my daddy?
Anonymous
5/23/19, 5:20 AM
So HOT
Anonymous
5/23/19, 5:02 AM
Hope there's a sequel in the works!
boi98229
5/23/19, 4:38 AM
Everyone else who has made a comment seems like a long-time fan. As your newest over-the-top fan, i just have to agree with everyone else how hot this story is! i love the way in which you reveal both to Sleepy Boy and the readers over the course of the story the truth of what happened in the past, including the already made ultimate decision that Sleepy Boy will be leaving his girlfriend in order to live his life as Daddy's hypno-responsive submissive/slave. i also love the way in which the sub is in effect hypnotized and seduced all over again while his mind slowly opens to his immediate past, and he re-experiences for the first time his surrender to Daddy's dominant control, charismatic voice, loving touch, and addictive pheromones. As the reader (and a sub) i re-experienced the past just as Sleepy Boy did, feeling the same cloudy mind and growing submission. (i shamefully admit though that i couldn't read far enough to get Daddy's command before i came. i probably deserve Daddy's discipline.) i love this story!! Thanks so much for sharing your imagination and writing talents. ~david
ForgottenCradle
5/23/19, 3:16 AM
oh,damn...this was what I needed tonight
LOHWPR
5/23/19, 2:35 AM
More Please
Anonymous
5/23/19, 2:25 AM
This series overall is wonderful with some fantastic ideas. i always loved the original Area 51 story and this series is an exciting continuation.
Anonymous
5/23/19, 1:09 AM
*elmo doll in flames* YEEEEESSSSSSSSS! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SO LONG!