Hi again absman :) And yes i understand that feeling is a bit sad, when you know that you make an effort for something and don't get much in return, even a comment of encouragement, "man you're doing great keep it up¡"But that's a lot to ask but well. all the public must understand that in all narrative history there must be "transition chapters" and that there is not always going to be an amount of sex, growth and excessive lust, within those chapters, but what matters is that you are well and that we are aware that something big is comming. going back to history 1-exactly crush the SPARK, but he does tried everything, even if Superion doesn't have his powers, Even the same horde defeated him without a Superion, something that is not clear to me is the relationship of time, I explain, he did everything possible to prevent the horde from defeating him but he fail, to which he created a lot of parallel universes of which he was inevitably defeated, but why any Rex appeared before the Rex we know in this story, maybes a loop of the time but the Time Stalker would realize this, maybe the Rex of those other universes won and the Rex that we see in this story is the singularity or the stroke of luck that I needed, MAYBE I am over-thinking but When you had talk to me about the time, I can not avoid a talk, is a topic what I love. 2-oh I see, but as all GREAT POWER can not come without a GREAT SACRIFICE to get it .... yeah I can observe that "change of way" but what I'm been reading and observing, he would have to pass an important event to change your mentality to a heroic. 3-speaking of Smarty I still will not come up with a more specific conclusion but if I want to say that from my point of view it is not longer a machine for the simple fact of feel Pleasure he no longer does a pragmatic machine, but as you said, I will wait until the next chapters. 4-you are right, Rex not to used all his power I still will not come up with a more specific conclusion, with respect to Val-or, I will not add anything else I will wait patiently as it evolves in the next chapters to get a clear idea, I just hope it does not suffer more (I took so much love to him and I hope it does not turn evil because that would break my heart hahaha.) PD: I wondered if you would have a discord or Skype account because I would like to talk about more things about the story but in private if not bother you and if you wanna obviously.

i love hypnosis and D/s, so found this story particularly hot. i loved the way the hypnotic sessions are handled in a very real (even though necessarily short) way. Straight-to-Gay transformations seem very popular, but personally i prefer plots involving D/s gay guys in which one is seduced and transformed into a very submissive bottom, is introduced to bdsm, or forces a sub to try new kinks or greatly extend former limits. Doms with strong hypnosis skills and powerful control, and subs in denial of hypnosis are a fun combination. Thanks for a great read! i am looking forward to the continuation of this story and its characters.

very hot! boy pussy is a true classic. one thing i will say is againstmywill always really focused on the humiliation of the act no matter what it was. it was almost as much about the degradation as it was the sex thats why the tone felt a bit off from his world he would let them continue to hate the act they were performing for a bit. his work was always a bit darker and meaner. but that being said this was still a grate contribution and well written please continue!!

This was so hot! please make more

Incredible!!

Great story!! Loved it!!!

Post your ideas for subsequent chapters. Inspiration well needs replenishment.

Love the father turning his son into a pup slave. And well told. Thank you.

Excellent work

best line in the piece: "Chris' cock twitched almost in unison with the man's, as if their sexual urges have finally calibrated." Very well said! Calibrating the urges of the victim.... Nice!