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May 21, 2019
Anonymous
5/22/19, 12:15 AM
Excellent work
bmax
5/21/19, 11:55 PM
best line in the piece: "Chris' cock twitched almost in unison with the man's, as if their sexual urges have finally calibrated." Very well said! Calibrating the urges of the victim.... Nice!
5/21/19, 11:10 PM
In consideration of the old superhero this was brilliant.
Vicbiguy
5/21/19, 11:05 PM
Not up to you usual standard. Presume its just chapter one and you will develop it.
May 21, 2019
Vicbiguy
5/21/19, 10:53 PM
Nice work, especially love the images, want to learn more,
Anonymous
5/21/19, 10:49 PM
Even God is a filthy cock sucking faggot that swallows.
Derek Williams
5/21/19, 9:39 PM
Loving this. I didn’t expect the transformation to be so sudden and far reaching, and the way he’s merging in his old reality with the new is fantastic.
Anonymous
5/21/19, 9:32 PM
Can't wait to read the next installment. I really hope Chris finds a way to seduce his dad.
5/21/19, 6:50 PM
The origional story is a guilty pleasure of mine and so seeing this was awesome. Though i admit to prefering mattrs related to butt more then coc. Hehe
firesix
5/21/19, 6:42 PM
I was hoping someone would write a sequel or spinoff! Fucking love it. Great work and pretty good writing. A singlular tip - maybe more paragraph breaks. The paragraphs weren't too long, but it can be good to have spaces between dialogue so it's not so easy to mix up who's saying what. But regardless, I love this story and I really, really hope you write more!