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Anonymous
5/20/19, 8:24 PM
as my Personal Hypnotist that was a great story loved that Paul was telling the whole truth and no one heard
Anonymous
5/20/19, 7:55 PM
THIS IS GREAT! Are you gonna write anymore stories? Its been a while.
5/20/19, 7:38 PM
the story= Awesome that amazing pun of a title= Somehow even better
Anonymous
5/20/19, 7:37 PM
excellent writing and imagery! Well done!
Anonymous
5/20/19, 6:30 PM
Excellent work
Jelle
5/20/19, 5:42 PM
What an amazing read! Loved every transformation and the whole story of Raul and Carlos was fantastic!
topaz172
5/20/19, 4:46 PM
Thank you Anon3... I do have more chapters.... lets see, We have Coach and his nasty little side-line. (a darker chapter), Cockwood & Co...which is about some deleted memories and is mostly inside someone's head (more romantic in tone)... after that We have the Elves (so very polite and acidic...having the servitor wet wipe the hand you touched *after* your handshake), the Wilde Hunt and Puppies! who's a good boy hey, who's a good boy, yes you are! Honestly this is the first Futa that I've written. I've done things that are close, but this is the first thats the 'classic futa'. This one probably needed a longer transition, the brevity is due to originally being part of the Pool Party Chapter. With regards transformation Its pretty much what I do 'mental and physical'. I keep reminding myself downplay the physical on this particular series... but sometimes you get mermen anyway. I try to include a bit of world-building in these things...I'm interested in feedback...is it ok the way I do it or should I put the world building 'story arc' stuff into their own chapters so that you can ignore them for the fap?
5/20/19, 4:12 PM
Amazing! Made me cum pretty hard at the end! Also I know it's probably just me but I kinda hope they defeat Cern in the end and leave, living down there forever would be BORING af lol
Anonymous
5/20/19, 4:00 PM
Great story!!!!
AgainstMyWill
5/20/19, 3:57 PM
I liked this one!! the subtle little findom was a hot little extra :) Sexy seeing him turned into a little fuck toy.