Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/20/19, 6:30 PM
Excellent work
Jelle
5/20/19, 5:42 PM
What an amazing read! Loved every transformation and the whole story of Raul and Carlos was fantastic!
topaz172
5/20/19, 4:46 PM
Thank you Anon3... I do have more chapters.... lets see, We have Coach and his nasty little side-line. (a darker chapter), Cockwood & Co...which is about some deleted memories and is mostly inside someone's head (more romantic in tone)... after that We have the Elves (so very polite and acidic...having the servitor wet wipe the hand you touched *after* your handshake), the Wilde Hunt and Puppies! who's a good boy hey, who's a good boy, yes you are! Honestly this is the first Futa that I've written. I've done things that are close, but this is the first thats the 'classic futa'. This one probably needed a longer transition, the brevity is due to originally being part of the Pool Party Chapter. With regards transformation Its pretty much what I do 'mental and physical'. I keep reminding myself downplay the physical on this particular series... but sometimes you get mermen anyway. I try to include a bit of world-building in these things...I'm interested in feedback...is it ok the way I do it or should I put the world building 'story arc' stuff into their own chapters so that you can ignore them for the fap?
5/20/19, 4:12 PM
Amazing! Made me cum pretty hard at the end! Also I know it's probably just me but I kinda hope they defeat Cern in the end and leave, living down there forever would be BORING af lol
Anonymous
5/20/19, 4:00 PM
Great story!!!!
AgainstMyWill
5/20/19, 3:57 PM
I liked this one!! the subtle little findom was a hot little extra :) Sexy seeing him turned into a little fuck toy.
ForgottenCradle
5/20/19, 2:36 PM
again,a great story. I love the unaware theme in your work and the detail in which you show the change
Anonymous
5/20/19, 2:24 PM
Normally transformation and futanari are low on the list of kinks that I enjoy, but the way you wrote it is really good. I look forward to the next chapter. (and pray very hard that there will be many chapters to come)
Martin
5/20/19, 1:38 PM
Reread the last paragraph and also check the tags... Hint: The serum seems to need to be transformed before it works... :)
Anonymous
5/20/19, 1:17 PM
A bit confusing, but after a few read i kinda get it. Mike want Doug to turn Mike Straight. Mike slip the drug into his own coffee. and now Mike have the Drug in his tummy, and waiting for Doug to change him? well Doug don't really have to turn him straight does he, since Mike gonna be under soon, he can do whatever he want to Mike.