Thank you Anon3... I do have more chapters.... lets see, We have Coach and his nasty little side-line. (a darker chapter), Cockwood & Co...which is about some deleted memories and is mostly inside someone's head (more romantic in tone)... after that We have the Elves (so very polite and acidic...having the servitor wet wipe the hand you touched *after* your handshake), the Wilde Hunt and Puppies! who's a good boy hey, who's a good boy, yes you are! Honestly this is the first Futa that I've written. I've done things that are close, but this is the first thats the 'classic futa'. This one probably needed a longer transition, the brevity is due to originally being part of the Pool Party Chapter. With regards transformation Its pretty much what I do 'mental and physical'. I keep reminding myself downplay the physical on this particular series... but sometimes you get mermen anyway. I try to include a bit of world-building in these things...I'm interested in feedback...is it ok the way I do it or should I put the world building 'story arc' stuff into their own chapters so that you can ignore them for the fap?

Amazing! Made me cum pretty hard at the end! Also I know it's probably just me but I kinda hope they defeat Cern in the end and leave, living down there forever would be BORING af lol

Great story!!!!

I liked this one!! the subtle little findom was a hot little extra :) Sexy seeing him turned into a little fuck toy.

again,a great story. I love the unaware theme in your work and the detail in which you show the change

Normally transformation and futanari are low on the list of kinks that I enjoy, but the way you wrote it is really good. I look forward to the next chapter. (and pray very hard that there will be many chapters to come)

Reread the last paragraph and also check the tags... Hint: The serum seems to need to be transformed before it works... :)

A bit confusing, but after a few read i kinda get it. Mike want Doug to turn Mike Straight. Mike slip the drug into his own coffee. and now Mike have the Drug in his tummy, and waiting for Doug to change him? well Doug don't really have to turn him straight does he, since Mike gonna be under soon, he can do whatever he want to Mike.

@Felix -- thank you so much for this comment! I was feeling kind of down because this chapter hadn't been getting any feedback -- and even though it's mostly exposition and storytelling, personally, I really like it. I get it, it's not great jack-off fodder (though I promise, it leads to some), so I'm cool. But I'm happy to get your comments and I'm anxious to dig into them. Here's what we know: 1) The Time Stalker believes that the key to destroying the Horde is Teen Superion -- since Teen Superion is the "inspiration" for the Horde, if he's out of the picture, the Horde won't form. But that doesn't necessarily mean KILLING him.... 2) For Rex, at that stage of the story, the only reward was power. Will Rex grow and change and discover a heroic side as time goes on? That remains to be seen. He has been seeing things in a new light, however... In some ways, you answer your own question with this quote: >possible scene between...Rex and Superion while the time stalker watches omnipresently, his little puppet rewriting his destiny and that of the Horde > Something to that... As to Smartiak 6, let's remember that he's part computer, so very pragmatic. He doesn't consider the emotional cost of his decisions. However, he's made his motives clear: there are certain members of the Horde that won't be affected by Rex's powers, so Smarty has taken it upon himself to solve that problem. You'll see more where that leads in the coming chapters. Remember too that Rex hadn't really used his powers "full-out" with the Horde, to create the kind of hyper-masculine slaves we saw in the original KING REX, superheroes who all blindly loved and followed him. Val-Or is the first character Rex has really brought "all the way" in this series. Val-Or is kind of riding an emotional high, too, so we'll see how that develops... Feel free to ask as many questions as you like. English may not be your mother tongue, but I understood you quite well. Thank you again.

Thank You Man, i loved it