Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/20/19, 3:53 AM
Gah!!! Need more!! Cliffhanger!!!! :(
Felix
5/20/19, 3:48 AM
Hi Absman :), with respect to the story I really have to say that you are doing a great job, but you are leaving me with questions rather than answers, I mean, the time stalker wants to Superion out of the equation either in a way or the other, and if really Rex had to choose between killing his beloved to accept the reward, or if really rewards it is just another farce of the time stalker just to attract to Rex to his game. the other question is that if really Rex loves Superion and if he would give his life for it? and the other thing is that we should not deny the great progress that had been made by the character as a grown up in the personal sense and as he has known himself, with respect to Smartiak 6 had the hope that he would wake up but it is noticeable that he is terribly corrupted I would have liked to see him play on two sides. to conclude I have to say that this chapter was happily sad, Val-or wanted to be loved and unwittingly found the person least suited to know that meaning or maybe not ... what I can emphasize is the possible scene of a trio between val-or, Rex and Superion while the time stalker watches omnipresently his little puppet rewriting his destiny and that of the. PD: You are doing an amazing job and excuse my English but it is not my mother tongue, i have more questions but my english is a problem right now, because i'm scared to make a mistake And that Difficult our understanding, Let Me Know :).
Anonymous
5/20/19, 3:48 AM
The structure of the sex change seemed somewhat transphobic, which was s huge boner-killer.
5/20/19, 3:21 AM
Thank you to the people above for your very positive and encouraging comments. I got the idea for this story from a recent radio programme on the restitution of 'stolen' artefacts by European museums to their original countries and from that bit at the end of the first Indiana Jones film 'Raiders of the Lost Ark' when the Ark of the Covenant, which has been shown to be a powerful weapon, is crated and trundled into the vast storeroom of a museum to be forgotten.
Anonymous
5/20/19, 2:25 AM
great story
Anonymous
5/20/19, 1:51 AM
This was INCREDIBLE. The writing is first-rate and the story line is brewing as a good story should. This is the product of writing, researching and editing. Novices, take heed at what good writing is.
Anonymous
5/20/19, 12:57 AM
wow that was so hot!!!!
JMan
5/20/19, 12:07 AM
I agree with Deckers - love your writing and your interracial themes. I look forward to this!
Anonymous
5/19/19, 11:34 PM
I can't wait to read more.
Anonymous
5/19/19, 10:30 PM
Holy fuck! AMAZING! Your stories are the BEST. I love that whole progression and the final realisation of what he has become, as the other guys step up!