Recent Comments

5/18/19, 6:59 PM
at topaz, i definitely agree that his transformation is rather quick. It felt quick when i wrote it but i felt that it rich's transformation wasnt the main focus of this story so i let it slide. thank you for the constructive feedback. stuff like this allows me to improve as i work.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 3:49 PM
Awesome!!! Interesting follow-up to the original.
topaz172@aol.com
5/18/19, 1:12 PM
For me Rich's transition from toe licking to fully aware Zombie-master felt a little quick and would have been hot if expanded upon... suggest you write a flashback of him recalling that 'character growth' and possibly more about the nature of the contaminant. Hopefully you take this as constructive comment as you've constructed a compelling hot story.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 12:46 PM
Thank you for including a character who uses singular they. it's so rare in this genre.
Evan
5/18/19, 12:34 PM
Awesome conclusion to the first part. The beta bitch transformation sequence was particularly good for me. Look forward to more and seeing what other tricks they have up their sleeves. And the new beta responding.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 12:14 PM
Great job, can't wait to see where it goes next.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 11:47 AM
another great part to this growing story
Dodger
5/18/19, 10:47 AM
I had always hoped for an update to this one.
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5/18/19, 9:28 AM
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5/18/19, 9:23 AM
hi anonymous commenter, we here at hypnopupos hear you concerns and have determined that there seems to be a bit of a mix up here. This chapter, and all other chapters after, were not written or co written by nananadangerous. if your looking for that chapter its the chapter prior to this. second although the characters appear younger in his version my version clearly fits in with in the rules of the website. third these are fictional characters of mine and his creating their age is not fixed or set in stone unlike other well known characters.