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topaz172@aol.com
5/19/19, 10:09 AM
Anon... good question. in this universe lesbian and gay are different races... same abilities, but not cross compatible. So your TG can use a Queen's power to look very convincixng, more so than current science, but can't do that final leap. In fact the next chapter sort of explores that limit. In this universe, the closest a guy can get to full genderswap via a Queen is a Futinari. As I'm looking at divergent species a Futinari would be fertile... but only produce gay sons.
absman420
5/19/19, 9:52 AM
Thank you! Much of the payoff of chapter 6 happens in chapter 7, as you will see. I have a friend reading a couple chapters ahead and Val-Or's transformation is one of his favorite moments. Mine, too. Forgive my love of exposition in this chapter -- and thank you for trusting me. Where we're going is worth the wait! As you can see, I've used several minor HORDE villains in the past couple chapters: Kharlak, Hypnoso, Electric Lord. I'm trying to give the heroes small stuff to do while I build the bigger villain's arc and wade through these transformations. I'm sorry you feel the pacing isn't strong enough -- it's been a challenge to plot. keep reading!
Anonymous
5/19/19, 9:09 AM
I'm curious to see how a trans person (male or female) would respond to being claimed by a Queen. What changes would lie in store for them?
LeadPb
5/19/19, 1:07 AM
Not the hottest chapter, but do I feel a build-up to something spectacular... With that said, Mr. Absman is decidedly one of the best authors on this site.
topaz172@aol.com
5/19/19, 12:09 AM
Anon guy... closest thing to a supervillian so far.. hmmm... Well 'Jill-Jak The Ripper' was in this last chapter. Next chapter you get Nunzio and Guido a pair of organised criminals. In a future chapter there is Coach Harris, who's a nasty one. and at the top of the food chain some of the other Queens of the High Fam will be a problem...Mistress-Queen for instance. I promise it won't all be lollipops and true love..but you'll get that as well. On the good side you get to meet Cockwood & Sons the Builders (out and Proud for 6 generations) particularly the sons Peter, Willy and Todger.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 11:52 PM
Really like this stories!! Somehow reminds me the hypno scenes in the movie " Indiana Jones and The Temple of Doom" turned me on when I was a teen.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 11:41 PM
Cant wait to see the next chapter!! Since we have the superhero type now, will here be the supervillain type?
Anonymous
5/18/19, 11:19 PM
note to self don't read this in a pub waiting for people
Anonymous
5/18/19, 9:08 PM
Excellent
topaz172@aol.com
5/18/19, 7:22 PM
@Pup... I get it that having split them up you had to go with one... always a tough choice ... How I look at it, it would be narratively more important to 'show' the evolution from victim to super-zombie, particularly as super-zombies are also a new factor in the story.. I'd do that *'first'* as it heightens the threat to your second protagonist. Although not published yet, I have a chapter to my current story that follows a different character.. specifically so he gets a bad end and highlights a future threat to main characters.