Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/18/19, 8:24 AM
love it! can't wait for the next chapter!
5/18/19, 8:10 AM
i do do my best to catch spelling errors but some still slip through.
transformheaven
5/18/19, 7:25 AM
Hot story! Try to read over it before you post ot though, biiig spelling mistakes sometimes. But still hot ;)
transformheaven
5/18/19, 6:02 AM
Thanks for your comment Hypnothrill! Glad to hear you like it! I do notice that I'm still struggling to find "the sweet spot" with the pacing. As you maybe noticed this is one of my longer stories because I wanted to pace it a bit slower then usual. But I still need to find the balance where you don't explain too much or go too slow. But well, hope to improve that ;) Anyway, thanks for the feedback! :)
Lustystallion
5/18/19, 5:53 AM
loved it. what a great series
5/18/19, 5:23 AM
I love the way he gets ensnared, and I'm very excited to see what happens next.
Anonymous
5/18/19, 3:04 AM
It's a transformation story.
5/18/19, 2:38 AM
This is such a hot series, and the ideas here are awesome. But IMO the pacing is a little too frantic; I loved reading about Tyler's mental and physical transformations, but I wish they'd happened a bit more slowly.
Vivid
5/18/19, 1:56 AM
I think it was more like 'implied' mind control since the prince took a sudden liking to the princess he never met before. But I still agree with you UchihaDEMS that there isn't any of the usual mind control we see on this sight. I still think this was an interesting story though.
5/18/19, 1:37 AM
I loved it. Different from most stories. Usually serpent stuff turns me off, but you made it hot. Well done.