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11/9/24, 6:11 PM
Hot story! The way the fantasy and reality blend in such a way that it's more the fantasy foretelling reality, rather than finding himself trapped in a story/fantasy, is very hot. And so is his fate as a rubber polo drone, at first I thought maybe the golden footie boys were the ones in charge of the drones but love that they ended up converted instead

11/9/24, 6:34 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) I'm really glad you like it! The inspiration hit me really hard and I just HAD to write it.
Goon
10/17/24, 2:03 PM
Great story. Loved the boy getting in on the action. Stroked for hours rereading.

11/9/24, 6:19 PM
@Goon Thanks G! Glad you enjoyed it.
11/9/24, 6:10 PM
With the original author's approval, the following is a potential next chapter written by me, linked here for east access (https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/10010813)

11/9/24, 6:16 PM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) 👍👍👍👍
11/9/24, 6:11 PM
Here is the original story's link to make finding it easier for people: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010438 [What’s Up Superman (Sup’s Suppository) ](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10010438)
Zander
11/4/24, 3:00 PM
I wouldn't call this chapter an alternative ending because nothing changes in the plot at all and nothing, everything is the same as in the original ending. I would call it an epilogue (continuation)...

11/4/24, 5:45 PM
@Zander No, I’d have to respectfully disagree. I think it’s an alternate epilogue. However, in the end isn’t its label.. like the old classic…a case of PoTAto or PotAto.🤔😉

Zander
11/9/24, 3:29 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) There is no significant difference. There is such a saying that the sum does not change from the rearrangement of the terms) in the chapter (this story) the same. There is no difference at all. Dr. Kumar defeated Batman and other heroes and remained so, they just showed Batman's humiliation in front of Gotham. I'm not saying that the story is bad, I liked it very much) because it is written like in dark erotica. But this does not cancel the fact that nothing has changed in the plot and characters. Personally, I see it that way. Your Original story also ended, where Dr. Kumar won and the heroes became slaves. Therefore, I do not see any special changes and the chapter looks more like an Epilogue.

11/9/24, 6:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Hi. I wrote this chapter. You're not wrong, I'm calling it an alternate ending since I showed it to @Kyle Cicero and he wanted me to submit it as my own story, so since these aren't all the words and ideas of the original author, I'm using the word 'Alternate' (that way, if Kyle wanted to go a different direction some day, he's free to include or ignore this chapter). I'd be thrilled if you read it after the original story and think of it as an epilogue. Thank you for reading!
M C
11/9/24, 5:39 PM
Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
11/9/24, 5:34 PM
Such a hot story
11/9/24, 3:42 PM
Wow!!!! Excelent sexy story!!! Much better written than your first one. You need to keep writing and continue this stories please!
Zander
11/9/24, 10:43 AM
Excellent chapter as always. I like the arcs of the heroes' fall and Batman's investigation, but I think that in this story Batman's mental abilities were reduced because the original Batman would have already been able to understand what happened and there would have been suspicions about who was behind it) In extreme cases, Batman could easily contact John Constantine and he would have helped him find out who was behind everything within an hour (after the ritual). But I think then the story would have ended quickly and the villain would not have had time to do everything he planned. And this is necessary for the narrative of the plot.
Anonymous
6/1/22, 6:29 AM
That was extremely hot, this story has been great to read so far. Keep up the great work!

6/1/22, 7:17 AM
Thanks!

11/9/24, 8:06 AM
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