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Zander
11/9/24, 10:43 AM
Excellent chapter as always. I like the arcs of the heroes' fall and Batman's investigation, but I think that in this story Batman's mental abilities were reduced because the original Batman would have already been able to understand what happened and there would have been suspicions about who was behind it) In extreme cases, Batman could easily contact John Constantine and he would have helped him find out who was behind everything within an hour (after the ritual). But I think then the story would have ended quickly and the villain would not have had time to do everything he planned. And this is necessary for the narrative of the plot.
Anonymous
6/1/22, 6:29 AM
That was extremely hot, this story has been great to read so far. Keep up the great work!

6/1/22, 7:17 AM
Thanks!

11/9/24, 8:06 AM
@Anonymous Like Smallpenis
11/9/24, 3:24 AM
The story fills in a little more and another one bites the dust. Always a pleasure reading you Jack. 💦
Mario
11/9/24, 2:53 AM
I just creamed myself after reading the story about this party, and holy shit, his cock looks like it is actually 10 inches. Derek must be confident to strip and cum for gay parties, if he is truly straight
11/8/24, 11:35 AM
A phenomenal chapter! The holding cell orgy was blisteringly hot. Bill and Nando was also fun. I think we're starting to get a vibe for how Alpha Toddson operates and runs his pack- Nando is unwilling to say he enjoyed sex with any other wolf but Alpha Pete? Hm, sounds like someone is a toxic alpha! I'm also loving Bill's growing characterization as the pack's happy-go-lucky poppers pig! Pulling up stakes sounds like a dire step for the pack. Where will they go? How much of the land surrounding their territory is claimed by other packs? And hanging over all of this is the mystery of the nature preserve and Alpha Seth's territory... I wonder...

11/9/24, 2:14 AM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Time will tell... Working doggedly on Ch. 6. The title of this novella is 'Pack,' but no good story allows a group of friends to get through unchanged...
HypnoMutt
11/8/24, 4:53 AM
A wild ride! Last two chapters just reading and enjoying the fast-paced plot, unbridled werewolf lust, pack dynamics galore, wondering who gets ravaged next, the FBI guy or the DUI guy or both at once? This is a big cast of characters that in less skillful hands would be hard to follow, but you've made each one memorable (and potentially worthy of their own spinoffs down the road). Great work.

11/9/24, 2:12 AM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) Thank you for the kind words. It's posts like these (along with good critiques/DMs) that keep me writing. It's so rewarding to know someone on the other side of my screen is enjoying it.
Perseus
11/9/24, 12:06 AM
This is one of your best work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
11/8/24, 9:00 PM
How is this not getting more love??? Awesome story!!!!
Nov 8, 2024
Anonymous
11/8/24, 7:15 PM
Can't wait to see what happens next

Hypno-boy
11/8/24, 8:39 PM
@Anonymous ❤️
Z1000
11/8/24, 8:00 PM
It's so hot! I can't wait the next chapter! When will you post it? the sooner would be the best :-)