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Papa Werebear
5/17/19, 7:50 AM
That was a very well written story! Tender and kinky and positive all at the same time! 🐻. Well done!
Anonymous
5/17/19, 6:02 AM
The cop's return and transformation is a surprise!! Already read this chapter twice and it still make me leak!!
Anonymous
5/17/19, 5:23 AM
Very hot, shame there wasn't very much scat in this chapter. It seemed like it would get more and more raunchy after the second chapter. It still got me off though :p
Anonymous
5/17/19, 4:03 AM
Can't get enough of this, please keep writing!
5/17/19, 3:12 AM
im here for it! youll all have to bare with me as i write these stories. this is definitely gonna be like an alien and promethus or the stars original trilogy and prequels situation. so lots of jumping back and forth on a timeline. At the end of the arc i'll be introducing a way pf keeping track of the time line and dates.
Anonymous
5/17/19, 3:00 AM
personally I'd like to know a little about the origins of the gas, what it was intended to do, what happened to the adults and animals and maybe what happens to the individual affected (mentally, cognitively, etc). If you really want to throw the prudes here into a true tizzy fit, include some underage incest. That should give them a stroke!
Anonymous
5/17/19, 2:58 AM
Good Lord.. How many Victorian prudes have to contribute their empty thoughts. If you don't like it then don't read it and certainly don't comment. I love that this story has engaged so many opinions and most have positive contributions or alternative story line suggestions. I can read through unedited stories or stories which were obviously translated by Google, but what I find most distracting is the intolerance and criticism.
5/17/19, 2:11 AM
Thanks for a good cop story.
5/17/19, 1:51 AM
it's definitely my own fault, but this story makes me sad. You did such a good job making me like Aaron in the first half (just like you did with Joey), that when he's turned into a mindless himbo and has his future taken away from him I'm just sad. And the fact that the whole crew apparently knew this could happen and none of them warned him or stopped it. His entire identity was basically stripped away and he had no say in the matter ☹ of course, this wouldn't be my response if you weren't such a good writer, so its probably a compliment I'm sad right now 😋
5/16/19, 11:44 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I'm going to have maybe one or two more stories in this series, which will probably focus on how the country as a whole changes rather than Jackson and Jockland High, maybe like colleges or how other institutions have changed. I could add more tf processes and different broish types. I read all my comments and love the creativity in them, so if you have any idea's of what you would like to see please share and I may add it in. Rozza