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Zander
11/4/24, 3:00 PM
I wouldn't call this chapter an alternative ending because nothing changes in the plot at all and nothing, everything is the same as in the original ending. I would call it an epilogue (continuation)...

11/4/24, 5:45 PM
@Zander No, I’d have to respectfully disagree. I think it’s an alternate epilogue. However, in the end isn’t its label.. like the old classic…a case of PoTAto or PotAto.🤔😉

Zander
11/9/24, 3:29 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) There is no significant difference. There is such a saying that the sum does not change from the rearrangement of the terms) in the chapter (this story) the same. There is no difference at all. Dr. Kumar defeated Batman and other heroes and remained so, they just showed Batman's humiliation in front of Gotham. I'm not saying that the story is bad, I liked it very much) because it is written like in dark erotica. But this does not cancel the fact that nothing has changed in the plot and characters. Personally, I see it that way. Your Original story also ended, where Dr. Kumar won and the heroes became slaves. Therefore, I do not see any special changes and the chapter looks more like an Epilogue.

11/9/24, 6:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Hi. I wrote this chapter. You're not wrong, I'm calling it an alternate ending since I showed it to @Kyle Cicero and he wanted me to submit it as my own story, so since these aren't all the words and ideas of the original author, I'm using the word 'Alternate' (that way, if Kyle wanted to go a different direction some day, he's free to include or ignore this chapter). I'd be thrilled if you read it after the original story and think of it as an epilogue. Thank you for reading!
M C
11/9/24, 5:39 PM
Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
11/9/24, 5:34 PM
Such a hot story
11/9/24, 3:42 PM
Wow!!!! Excelent sexy story!!! Much better written than your first one. You need to keep writing and continue this stories please!
Zander
11/9/24, 10:43 AM
Excellent chapter as always. I like the arcs of the heroes' fall and Batman's investigation, but I think that in this story Batman's mental abilities were reduced because the original Batman would have already been able to understand what happened and there would have been suspicions about who was behind it) In extreme cases, Batman could easily contact John Constantine and he would have helped him find out who was behind everything within an hour (after the ritual). But I think then the story would have ended quickly and the villain would not have had time to do everything he planned. And this is necessary for the narrative of the plot.
Anonymous
6/1/22, 6:29 AM
That was extremely hot, this story has been great to read so far. Keep up the great work!

6/1/22, 7:17 AM
Thanks!

11/9/24, 8:06 AM
@Anonymous Like Smallpenis
11/9/24, 3:24 AM
The story fills in a little more and another one bites the dust. Always a pleasure reading you Jack. 💦
Mario
11/9/24, 2:53 AM
I just creamed myself after reading the story about this party, and holy shit, his cock looks like it is actually 10 inches. Derek must be confident to strip and cum for gay parties, if he is truly straight
11/8/24, 11:35 AM
A phenomenal chapter! The holding cell orgy was blisteringly hot. Bill and Nando was also fun. I think we're starting to get a vibe for how Alpha Toddson operates and runs his pack- Nando is unwilling to say he enjoyed sex with any other wolf but Alpha Pete? Hm, sounds like someone is a toxic alpha! I'm also loving Bill's growing characterization as the pack's happy-go-lucky poppers pig! Pulling up stakes sounds like a dire step for the pack. Where will they go? How much of the land surrounding their territory is claimed by other packs? And hanging over all of this is the mystery of the nature preserve and Alpha Seth's territory... I wonder...

11/9/24, 2:14 AM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Time will tell... Working doggedly on Ch. 6. The title of this novella is 'Pack,' but no good story allows a group of friends to get through unchanged...
HypnoMutt
11/8/24, 4:53 AM
A wild ride! Last two chapters just reading and enjoying the fast-paced plot, unbridled werewolf lust, pack dynamics galore, wondering who gets ravaged next, the FBI guy or the DUI guy or both at once? This is a big cast of characters that in less skillful hands would be hard to follow, but you've made each one memorable (and potentially worthy of their own spinoffs down the road). Great work.

11/9/24, 2:12 AM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) Thank you for the kind words. It's posts like these (along with good critiques/DMs) that keep me writing. It's so rewarding to know someone on the other side of my screen is enjoying it.