Great story!! Loved it!!!!

My main issue with this is actually about having line breaks and checking for grammar. It is hard to read it in one large block of text.

I am 18, and I was sexually active when I was 16. . I was immature,and dumb. I was also horny as hell and knew what I wanted. I went after what I wanted I like the story. It has a lot of potential. Just seems rushed. Use the fog as a character. It's thick. It's hard to see through. Does it only affect teens? Or are all males affected? Am also glad to see that the zombies are not running zombies. That just doesn't make sense. Keep up the good work. Look forward to reading more

as far as the talk of making a story in this universe i definitely will be doing that once this arc is over. i really like setting up worlds to be played in and then just focusing on individuals experiencing the world.

Jonathan is not wearing a collar in his morning-after picture. Whoops!

Fuck, dude, this is so hot I can't stop rereading the whole series. I love how in part 2 you start focusing on his bulging body, full nuts, swollen taint, bursting through his clothes, and then you take it further here. This really pushes so many of my buttons. Compulsive masturbation, cock growth, fattening, body growth overall, just turning into a big, thick, hulking body with hardly any brain left, thinking only with his massive, veiny, throbbing cock, and his huge, full nutsack. I love how his orgasms are super infrequent and mostly he's addicted to edging, but when he does cum he gets brief moments of clarity, but the drugs and changes are too strong so he's slipping further away. I love that way you make the compulsion a feedback loop - how every time he becomes aware that he's losing control to his masturbation addiction, the very realization itself makes him horny and locks him in - and on and on it goes. In my stories I always like to have a malicious presence doing the corrupting, but I sort of love how so far there's nothing like that here - just this website of addicts with no mention of who's running the show, like it's just a virus being passively spread around, unstoppable but not sentient or anything. I love the hints that it's starting to spread. I really hope you're planning to continue this... I'd love to see him start unwittingly corrupting other guys and then see them fall into the same trap. I also love stories with grotesque enlargement so the thought of his cock growing until it's freakish, two feet long and too thick around to wrap his hands around, so he finally gets to where all he can do is worship it non-stop, but it takes him days to stimulate his huge cock enough to actually bring himself to orgasm - ugh, it's got my mind going. And, being me, I'd love to see the idea mentioned in the second chapter developed more - see him get together with other masturbators and start fucking and helping each other out, especially since they've got those huge fat bubble butts now. (And REALLY, being me, I'd then have them get addicted to huffing each other's ass cracks while they edge...) Hope you're not done with this one, it's amazing.

How hot!

As usual, people like you do a great job to discredit themselves. Well done. This was your last posting that I'll allow to be posted here. Please don't come back here. You're not interested in visiting a site managed by a fucking weirdo anyway, are you?

@martin i literally voted for hillary but nice try you fucking weirdo

> Super normal and not creepy at all that the owner of this website is justifying children in sexual stories. Super creepy how you manipulate opinion by stating blatant lies. Very Trumpy. People like you are not welcome here.