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Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
5/15/19, 2:07 PM
Very well written! as others have pointed out, not every story has to be a wild sex romp. Noot that there’s anything wrong with those either of course!
Anonymous
5/15/19, 12:54 PM
This is a great story idea. It could easily be used for various types of gay stereotypes, not just twink.
May 10, 2019
Anonymous
5/15/19, 8:13 AM
Love this!!!!
david
5/15/19, 6:50 AM
@hyphap i completely understand and react similarly to many stories. However, in this case i assumed (perhaps naively, particularly given the story summary) overall good intentions by Henry for both of them for the long term. In my ignorant bliss, i assumed the best! (And Henry did make me feel so so good!) :)) Thanks again to Twan for his enticing stories.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 4:58 AM
Awesome story. How about an installment about the brother?
5/15/19, 12:09 AM
I always think of writing an alien milking story but never come up with a good idea. Yours was great. I loved the last choice they were allowed to make and the Navy SEAL personified the pained human decision very well.
david
5/14/19, 9:15 PM
OMG! This is so so hot!! Like the readers posting previous comments, i agree that the hottest part of the story is the use of pheromones, touch, and physical control along with a calming caring but very insistent commentary to be slowly mind-fucked and seduced. i would love to lose my virginity to Henry -- over and over and over again!! Thanks so much for this great story. i have to say too, that the comments from your readers seem pretty hot too. Ckabu, you can totally manipulate me anytime ;) slavethruhypno, would love to go for coffee sometime and hear about your favorite hypno masters.
5/14/19, 7:35 PM
You had excellent descriptions and a good idea and back story. Good job. :)
david
5/14/19, 5:23 PM
Good idea. Sexy visuals. Well written. Hot!! Unfortunately much too short for my preferences, without enough character development, relationship development, or the mental and physical details of Dane's take-down. Again, personally, i love getting the details of the seduction and take-down. Still, very hot and enjoyable. Thanks so much!
Rick
5/14/19, 3:58 PM
My 5th read of this hot story. Being ex military remember all those hot looking Jack's out there with their huge booted feet. Wishing I had the chance to indulge myself. Maybe in a future story have Jack working in a recruiting station with a few other soldiers. All looking sharp in their alpha dress uniforms, wearing those hard plastic corofram dress shoes, and their thin black dress socks.(Speaking from experience, those corofram dress shoes definitely make your feet sweat, and leave a nice heady aroma inside the shoe). Jack could be in the office talking to some hot high school jocks thinking about joining the military. Definitely a hypnogun opportunity there.