Recent Comments

Martin
5/15/19, 5:00 PM
Guys, please don't be so judgmental. This obsession that a story becomes unacceptable right away if a character is not at least 18 is something I simply can't understand. The US law, which makes it illegal to have sex with anyone below 18, is not shared in most other countries in the world. People below 18 DO have sex, all over the world, and even US teenagers are not unheard of getting laid... And, believe it or not, the US moral compass is not shared by most people on this world either. The rules for acceptable stories on this site are [spelled out here](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/create) Please read that and refrain from telling us, that reading about sex with a 16 year old is a big no-no while a story about someone hypnotizing an 18 year old to practically rape him against his will, seems to be totally ok for you.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 4:37 PM
I have no problem with this. Please continue!
5/15/19, 3:59 PM
i mean everyone is entitled to their opinions, but i the author should try to be more aware of these things. this is my first story and its not even entirely mine. so im here for suggestions.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 3:43 PM
I guess nonexistent minors have rights and feelings too, they could hurt themselves in this imaginary world and of course people would get offended
5/15/19, 3:42 PM
i totally hear yah, some of this was a result of the collab that happened. but i ran into the problem of needing a solid older younger sibling while still keeping them kinda young. so rich is 18 and tommy is 16 :/. really just trying to see if the core idea would play well.
GrowingGeek
5/15/19, 3:08 PM
I really enjoyed this, loved that sudden and unexpected realisation that he'd been transformed and loved it. In my opinion, I'd love to see more specifics on his size. How big is fat? We already know he wasn't lean, but how much bigger has he become? How does his extra weight feel? What knock on impacts does this make him think of? What would his family and friends think? etc - I love that extra detail and I think this would have taken a great story and made it excellent. Overall though a great job, well done!
Anonymous
5/15/19, 3:05 PM
one of my favorite stories here. hope you can write more.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 2:51 PM
premise is good but it's super uncomfortable that the characters are underage. can you not?
TheD
5/15/19, 2:34 PM
First off, I'm such a big fan of your work, all the way back to the Cupid Boy and Various Techniques stories. Your stories helped me acknowledge that I was gay. Second, this world you're building has SO much potential. Thank you for opening it to the community to contribute to it. Third, hit me up whenever you want at fueledboi@gmail.com to discuss story ideas or request nudes. That last bit is for everyone, I guess, but especially for you, Topaz172. I owe you so much.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 2:31 PM
Turks arent Arabs. They’re a separate cultural group with different customs, cultures, and languages