Recent Comments

david
5/14/19, 9:15 PM
OMG! This is so so hot!! Like the readers posting previous comments, i agree that the hottest part of the story is the use of pheromones, touch, and physical control along with a calming caring but very insistent commentary to be slowly mind-fucked and seduced. i would love to lose my virginity to Henry -- over and over and over again!! Thanks so much for this great story. i have to say too, that the comments from your readers seem pretty hot too. Ckabu, you can totally manipulate me anytime ;) slavethruhypno, would love to go for coffee sometime and hear about your favorite hypno masters.
5/14/19, 7:35 PM
You had excellent descriptions and a good idea and back story. Good job. :)
david
5/14/19, 5:23 PM
Good idea. Sexy visuals. Well written. Hot!! Unfortunately much too short for my preferences, without enough character development, relationship development, or the mental and physical details of Dane's take-down. Again, personally, i love getting the details of the seduction and take-down. Still, very hot and enjoyable. Thanks so much!
Rick
5/14/19, 3:58 PM
My 5th read of this hot story. Being ex military remember all those hot looking Jack's out there with their huge booted feet. Wishing I had the chance to indulge myself. Maybe in a future story have Jack working in a recruiting station with a few other soldiers. All looking sharp in their alpha dress uniforms, wearing those hard plastic corofram dress shoes, and their thin black dress socks.(Speaking from experience, those corofram dress shoes definitely make your feet sweat, and leave a nice heady aroma inside the shoe). Jack could be in the office talking to some hot high school jocks thinking about joining the military. Definitely a hypnogun opportunity there.
Anonymous
5/14/19, 2:15 PM
It's great to see another series from you, Topaz172. I enjoyed the idea and look forward to seeing how it comes out next. I am excited to watching myangel collect them all.
Anonymous
5/14/19, 1:39 PM
great stuff. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment
Anonymous
5/14/19, 11:13 AM
Very good, not enough quality milking stories
Jamie
5/14/19, 10:24 AM
dont u think some nerds would actually like to become a jock?? i mean... so far they all protest and whine but i can imagine some would love to become part of the system and become a happy mindless bro.
topaz172@aol.com
5/14/19, 8:55 AM
ulyssesgrant fair point... I'll have to write that one at some future point... on the plus side, you'll get a future chapter that does includes a guy who's been told that in order to bulk up and avoid olympic drug tests all he has to do is to take it up the ass..'just once' And I have yet to write the Gym Bunny episode
Anonymous
5/14/19, 7:47 AM
Yes please continue with this; keep coming back to it!