Recent Comments

11/8/24, 11:35 AM
A phenomenal chapter! The holding cell orgy was blisteringly hot. Bill and Nando was also fun. I think we're starting to get a vibe for how Alpha Toddson operates and runs his pack- Nando is unwilling to say he enjoyed sex with any other wolf but Alpha Pete? Hm, sounds like someone is a toxic alpha! I'm also loving Bill's growing characterization as the pack's happy-go-lucky poppers pig! Pulling up stakes sounds like a dire step for the pack. Where will they go? How much of the land surrounding their territory is claimed by other packs? And hanging over all of this is the mystery of the nature preserve and Alpha Seth's territory... I wonder...

11/9/24, 2:14 AM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Time will tell... Working doggedly on Ch. 6. The title of this novella is 'Pack,' but no good story allows a group of friends to get through unchanged...
HypnoMutt
11/8/24, 4:53 AM
A wild ride! Last two chapters just reading and enjoying the fast-paced plot, unbridled werewolf lust, pack dynamics galore, wondering who gets ravaged next, the FBI guy or the DUI guy or both at once? This is a big cast of characters that in less skillful hands would be hard to follow, but you've made each one memorable (and potentially worthy of their own spinoffs down the road). Great work.

11/9/24, 2:12 AM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) Thank you for the kind words. It's posts like these (along with good critiques/DMs) that keep me writing. It's so rewarding to know someone on the other side of my screen is enjoying it.
Perseus
11/9/24, 12:06 AM
This is one of your best work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
11/8/24, 9:00 PM
How is this not getting more love??? Awesome story!!!!
Nov 8, 2024
Anonymous
11/8/24, 7:15 PM
Can't wait to see what happens next

Hypno-boy
11/8/24, 8:39 PM
@Anonymous ❤️
Z1000
11/8/24, 8:00 PM
It's so hot! I can't wait the next chapter! When will you post it? the sooner would be the best :-)
VS
11/8/24, 6:57 PM
Great story! Please do another chapter!
11/1/24, 7:30 PM
I do you have one more chapter but I could not get it wrapped up in time to get it posted. I miss the deadline by a few hours so I will have to wait until after the 15th to actually post it. It is over 17,000 words though but it ties into all 4 chapters and characters while also being its own standalone chapter with a potential ending but still set up to where I could revisit the story later if I wanted to. I have several other Halloween theme projects that I was also working on so I'm thinking next year I might take a break on this series.

11/8/24, 3:07 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) I really want to know the ending of William
Anonymous
11/8/24, 1:36 PM
Fantastic! I'd absolutely would love to see more chapters like this. Just an in-depth look at those in the T Section becoming beasts!
Top+Bottom
5/16/24, 11:40 AM
"You would serve at my pleasure until I decide otherwise." Hottest line in this whole thing. Damn.

11/8/24, 6:12 AM
@Top+Bottom T+B, Thanks man. I'm glad it worked for you. -JT.