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ForgottenCradle
5/12/19, 11:33 AM
this is so sweet and sexy at the same time
May 12, 2019
JR
5/12/19, 10:26 AM
I liked the story but it felt rush, but you did better than I could so good job.
5/12/19, 4:18 AM
"They all orgasmed together, they all bonded together, and they all accepted their destinies together." Such a great line. It's an excellent piece exemplifying such a great story.
Aug 27, 2006
5/12/19, 4:18 AM
So incredibly hot! This story is from 2006, but if the author ever checks out this website again: great job Watchfire!
omg
5/12/19, 4:17 AM
The best on the site
Mar 29, 2019
Andrew Boots
5/12/19, 2:25 AM
this is a big desire to be held like this and body modified into my captors desire wake up with a totally new look. tats and piercing forced transformation . GREAT job!!!!
Anonymous
5/12/19, 2:25 AM
The other 'critics' of your stories couldn't leave anything negative on this page, because this story, every chapter, was incredible. I loved it. Keep writing.
Anonymous
5/12/19, 2:24 AM
Me, too!!
Anonymous
5/12/19, 2:23 AM
I liked it. I don't know what all the fuss is about.
5/11/19, 10:04 PM
And to that end, I's like to pose the following... while your prose style is nicely developed, I propose a slower burn, with a more developed internal monologue ; a longer, deeper insight into the thought processes imposed by Huck onto Eddie , for example, creating a set of responses that are more visceral. This might be more difficult in Eddie's responses toward Dixie (this is a gay site, after all) but Eddie's confusion might be a bit more conflict-driven. Overall, however, this is an excellent concept, with some structural gems.