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Mar 29, 2019
Andrew Boots
5/12/19, 2:25 AM
this is a big desire to be held like this and body modified into my captors desire wake up with a totally new look. tats and piercing forced transformation . GREAT job!!!!
Anonymous
5/12/19, 2:25 AM
The other 'critics' of your stories couldn't leave anything negative on this page, because this story, every chapter, was incredible. I loved it. Keep writing.
Anonymous
5/12/19, 2:24 AM
Me, too!!
Anonymous
5/12/19, 2:23 AM
I liked it. I don't know what all the fuss is about.
5/11/19, 10:04 PM
And to that end, I's like to pose the following... while your prose style is nicely developed, I propose a slower burn, with a more developed internal monologue ; a longer, deeper insight into the thought processes imposed by Huck onto Eddie , for example, creating a set of responses that are more visceral. This might be more difficult in Eddie's responses toward Dixie (this is a gay site, after all) but Eddie's confusion might be a bit more conflict-driven. Overall, however, this is an excellent concept, with some structural gems.
May 10, 2019
James 2
5/11/19, 9:47 PM
Would it be possible for James to hypnotize his brother also, making it a family affair.
Evan
5/11/19, 9:46 PM
Adore this series. So hot. LOVE the addition of Castor's brother character and him having more mental faculties and clone orgy. Fantastic, as always.
5/11/19, 9:42 PM
great story loved how Kyle changed into a Redneck Brother for Gator and a new son for Pa
JMan
5/11/19, 8:27 PM
> All of your stories seem to follow the same formula. The content is different, but the pace and outcome is always the same What an amazingly unhelpful critique. You are part of the reason why people don't write stories on here - you don't provide any value to him as a writer, you basically demean what he does. If you find his style not to your liking, **then don't fucking read his stories**. The internet really could learn a thing or two from the *if-you-have-nothing-nice-to-say-STFU* adage. My personal favorite variant on it is *What goes in your mouth should be good for you, what comes out should be good for others - Baylor Barbee*
Anonymous
5/11/19, 7:16 PM
Another great story