Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/9/19, 12:22 AM
I'm kind of disturbed how willing you are to dehumanize Trent. I know it's a made up story, but Trent seems cartoonishly evil. Because of all the things he apparently did, he doesn't seem like an actual character anymore. I know you're doing it to justify the body swap but it just all feels a bit extreme.
5/8/19, 11:08 PM
Wanna know where this is going...
Anonymous
5/8/19, 10:04 PM
I thought last chapter was a standalone so I'm pleasantly surprised with this! love it. hope there will be more!!
5/8/19, 9:03 PM
I love how the tone between the characters is set from the get go and the sub is just powerless to stop it even as he's made to give away more and more. Well written :)
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/8/19, 8:41 PM
Slowly taking away an resistance, step by step. Hot!
Anonymous
5/8/19, 6:56 PM
my absolute FAVORITE series
Blufman1
5/8/19, 5:40 PM
great story I'd love to write some stuff with you. we think the same way blufdude@aol.com
Blufman1
5/8/19, 5:37 PM
great work
Bruzzo
5/8/19, 4:17 PM
Okay, maybe not thin as floss. Very nice ending