Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/7/19, 3:43 PM
I love this series. The way you write it make this fantasy believable. No sudden jump in and instantly bend others to your will. If i am lucky enough to have a watch like that, i would be cautious and tread lightly like Van too. It help me connect myself to the character! Can't wait for more of your works.
May 6, 2019
KJ
5/7/19, 3:20 PM
I really enjoyed this. Would enjoy a sexier, slower paced version from the guys perspective!!!
lloyd311@aol.com
5/7/19, 11:42 AM
Finally! Oh, thank you thank you thank you...
Chusti
5/7/19, 5:59 AM
Could have done with some slightly more representative photos, but material is scarce in today's internet. It's interstandable.
Bruzzo
5/7/19, 5:48 AM
It seems like there's some loose ends that it might be hard to tie up sexily. Unless you're Wesley Bracken, but still, actually seeing the now enormous intelligent musclebound jockfessor actually perpetrate any kind of serious physical punishment on the wheelchair bound idiot he just took everything from is pretty hard to root for past the punchline. On the other hand, Trent could turn the tables and the bodies' intelligences and personalities flip back, and the machine could break leaving jockfessor an insecure meathead and Trent a scientist with a bright future. On the OTHER other hand it feels like we've had a lot of those stories lately, where the malevolent nerd changes the tables and then the tables turn AGAIN. Holy shit, M. Night Shyamalan, what an incredible twist ten years ago. It would be cool to see the nerd's deliciously evil plan come to fruition and get everything he wants without consequences... if you can just find a way to keep it from getting too messed up to inspire passion. It is a thin rope you have chosen to walk, Roth, thin as floss. I've already given up and swallowed my rope, I plan to have a very entertaining evening later.
May 6, 2019
5/7/19, 5:03 AM
This was fun. I liked the unusual viewpoint and it was a lot hotter (and less repetitive) than the men's would have been.
Anonymous
5/7/19, 4:26 AM
PLEASE GIVE US MORE!
May 6, 2019
5/7/19, 4:02 AM
Hypnominion: "My son once mentioned that Bewitched was a sitcom from Sam and Darrin’s perspective, but from Gladys Kravitz’s it was a Twilight Zone episode" That's a great and hilarious observation!
Anonymous
5/7/19, 3:32 AM
Nice story
May 6, 2019
Anonymous
5/7/19, 3:25 AM
Poor Carrie... it was so hot even without explicitly letting us know what was happening : )