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May 6, 2019
Cigarboy Cody
5/7/19, 1:26 AM
I liked it a lot. So different from your normal stories. Need more chapters. Have to know who or what is behind it all. The government? Mad scientist? Or a 400 lb tech nerd that lives in his mom's basement. Which would explain the need for the apartment
May 6, 2019
5/7/19, 12:58 AM
I think that it was hysterical! My son once mentioned that Bewitched was a sitcom from Sam and Darrin's perspective, but from Gladys Kravitz's it was a Twilight Zone episode; I sort'a got that feel... ;)
Apr 12, 2019
Anonymous
5/7/19, 12:42 AM
This story is actually kind of cute. I really enjoyed it. Good job!
5/6/19, 11:37 PM
Good story. A welcome change of pace. Glad Marty is going to enjoy some real sensual action with his new Di Di
Anonymous
5/6/19, 9:18 PM
i love the awareness Camden had but his complete lack of control to obey so hot especially during the power bottom song.
May 6, 2019
Anonymous
5/6/19, 7:44 PM
very uniqe....i liked it... definitely different from your usual. but enjoyable
Anonymous
5/6/19, 6:58 PM
id love to reread this from the bottoms perspective, it was really good.
Kevin
5/6/19, 6:28 PM
good story
May 6, 2019
5/6/19, 6:19 PM
That's a fair criticism; I think the sexier version of this story would be told from the guys' perspective. But I feel like I've already told that story many times before (and probably will tell it many times again), so I wanted to experiment with something different, where all the main sexy action is happening in the background and we only get glimpses of it, through the eyes of a character who's mostly oblivious to what's happening.
May 6, 2019
Anonymous
5/6/19, 6:12 PM
Interesting concept, but it feels lacking. My favourite aspect of your works is the way that we get to know how the subject feels as they’re being subjugated. Here we basically just get told “and then he was hypnotised” with absolutely no sense of the journey. If this is a narrative style you’re looking to experiment with again, that would be my big request - find a way to let us still see what the men are going through. Also, side note, Carrie has Arya ALL wrong if that’s her idea of WWAD