Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/5/19, 7:48 AM
Excellent work
Anonymous
5/5/19, 5:56 AM
Incredible series, I am so glad it is back!
May 2, 2019
5/5/19, 1:23 AM
Fairly engaging opening; let's see where this goes...
5/5/19, 1:15 AM
Another amazing entry from the mighty Hypnothrill! Reminds me of DC Comics' Starro the Conqueror
5/5/19, 12:52 AM
This. Was. Phenomenal. There is nothing like a slow burn narrative; it gives the reader time to grasp both the cognitive and visceral responses involved in a mind-control scenario, and you handled it masterfully. I'm adding my voice to what I'm guessing will be an increasing number of readers requesting a sequel.
M
5/4/19, 11:58 PM
FUCKING HOT STORY! I love it plus with the lyrics it made it even better. It would be awesome if there's a sequel.
fal.taylor@yahoo.com
5/4/19, 11:05 PM
I do love the emphasis on romance rather than just full on lust and sex for this one! I mean I still enjoy it, but it's fun to have something simple and cute between hypnotized guys~! Nice work!
Anonymous
5/4/19, 10:36 PM
very well written and enjoyable. Pity the last link is not
5/4/19, 10:24 PM
thanks @absman420, i had a lot of fun writing those lyrics. i had the idea of a sexy band for a long time but i didn't dare write the lyrics i felt the story needed because i'm not a native speaker and didn't have the abilities. glad i finally gave it a shot. it was surprisingly not that difficult.
5/4/19, 9:51 PM
It was great fun! A nice, slow burn through a range of emotions (and positions). And of course, I totally love of a non-linear narrative! Well done! Now -- this is totally true -- IRL, I'm a lyricist. I've written music & lyrics for 15 produced shows, including a national tour and a show in the Edinburgh Fringe Festival a few years ago (my personal pride). Granted, I'm more of the Sondheim school, but that only makes me a special kind of theatre snob -- the gay kind. (Note the pretentious spelling of the word "theatre".) With all that in mind, I think your lyrics worked great! I appreciate the effort you went through to do them and do them so well. They added a subtext to this story that is generally missing from this type of mind-control romp. It's what will continue to set this story apart in the years to come. Me like.