Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/5/19, 12:37 PM
LOVE IT!
May 1, 2016
Anonymous
5/5/19, 11:07 AM
This was so hot! Please make more
LongtimeFan
5/5/19, 7:58 AM
EXCELLENT! Your poetry was fantastic--I love how the meter of each singer's song matched their desires/its brainwashing job (the ode to Adam was pure worship full of high language, the workout song was droning and repetitive, the dumb jock song was simple and slow, the power-bottom songs were angry and commanding, etc.). Like Absman, I'm a Sondheim fan, so I love when lyrics help tell the story--and these really did! And the images of people in the room slowly transforming, losing their identities and having wild sex in public...damn. This is top-notch!
Anonymous
5/5/19, 7:48 AM
Excellent work
Anonymous
5/5/19, 5:56 AM
Incredible series, I am so glad it is back!
May 2, 2019
5/5/19, 1:23 AM
Fairly engaging opening; let's see where this goes...
5/5/19, 1:15 AM
Another amazing entry from the mighty Hypnothrill! Reminds me of DC Comics' Starro the Conqueror
5/5/19, 12:52 AM
This. Was. Phenomenal. There is nothing like a slow burn narrative; it gives the reader time to grasp both the cognitive and visceral responses involved in a mind-control scenario, and you handled it masterfully. I'm adding my voice to what I'm guessing will be an increasing number of readers requesting a sequel.
M
5/4/19, 11:58 PM
FUCKING HOT STORY! I love it plus with the lyrics it made it even better. It would be awesome if there's a sequel.
fal.taylor@yahoo.com
5/4/19, 11:05 PM
I do love the emphasis on romance rather than just full on lust and sex for this one! I mean I still enjoy it, but it's fun to have something simple and cute between hypnotized guys~! Nice work!