Recent Comments

5/4/19, 8:04 PM
@Dodger I'm glad you see this chapter as "ramping up" -- I was afraid, because of the nature of the storytelling in this chapter, that it would seem like I was stepping away from the main plot. But after the multitude of action-moments in Chapter 4, I wanted to rein it back just a little. Chapter 5 is a strangely short chapter (for me) but it does exactly what I want it to. As you will soon see, Chapter 6 is VERY long and -- because there were so many subplots to catch up on -- Chapter 7 is pretty long, too. I'm starting to see this as a 10-part story with an epilogue. > It’s also interesting to see a different aspect of Rex and where that may or may not lead. > I agree! It's been interesting to play with this character again and discover some new stuff about him. I've learned that he respects Alphas/ sexually confident males and genuinely has been able to make some friends here in the far flung future -- witness Rex and Electric Lad in this very chapter. When we get to the climactic moment in the story, Rex's actions may just surprise you.
5/4/19, 8:02 PM
I thought this one was terrific! I hope you write a sequel where Camden convinces all his friends to listen to his new favorite band!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
5/4/19, 7:05 PM
GReat story… as always! Thank you for sharing… and watch out for starfish
Anonymous
5/4/19, 5:12 PM
hot!
5/4/19, 4:23 PM
really enjoyed the treatment those two gave Refractor Kid.
Anonymous
5/4/19, 3:38 PM
WONDERING WHO RICHIES TYPE REALLY IS AND WHERE HE GETS HIS NUT IF HE GETS IT AT ALL. MAYBE HE ONLY JACKS ALONE IN HIS ROOM? WILL THERE BE A SEQUEL?
5/4/19, 3:26 PM
loved it, i suppose i would have prefered that the reverend remembered who he once was tho
lloyd311@aol.com
5/4/19, 2:37 PM
Yes, very well done! l love the mirror as the mechanism for the change. Thanks!
Anonymous
5/4/19, 2:20 PM
Wonderful
5/4/19, 1:49 PM
That was definitely different than I expected. Very hot and well-written. A really great descent with some nice buildup.