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Vicbiguy
5/3/19, 12:55 AM
Dang Willie you just keep getting better, cant wait for chapter 2!
Bign54@gmail.com
5/2/19, 9:44 PM
When is the next chapter coming out? :)
Evan
5/2/19, 9:20 PM
I adore these sorts of stories. So excited for a new game taking place. Great physical transformations so far, really looking forward to more.
Mar 30, 2018
Anonymous
5/2/19, 8:46 PM
Damn! This story got two loads out of me. Fuck!
statueboi31
5/2/19, 8:06 PM
I found your stories through a post on tumblr and ive read all three parts of this series. THIS STORY GOT MY DICK ROCK HARD AND I WISH I COULD HAVE POWER LIKE HIS. SUCH A HOT FANTASY and i like the compelling nature of the power complex taking over the owners body and mind. i would really like to read more of this.
May 2, 2019
rubberchap@gmail.com
5/2/19, 7:04 PM
I know you said it's your first story, but it is very confusing. Your title, "Cum Cookies for Everyone" changes to "The Second Dose" There are no cookies and only a slight mention of a previous encounter where a second session occurs. The main character ages from 10 to 18 years old with no real intensity to the story telling. This is where I stopped reading - "*He wanted to compare the feeling to the expert blow-jobs from his girlfriend. Or the really soft lips and the enthusiasm of his twenty year old student boy toy from this semester*." You never mentioned the Marvin's obsession with Damian had other mitigating attractions to another unmentioned 3rd party character that you failed to give a background story. This one that HAD the "Second Dose" - and I believe - has a more important storyline than the twins, or the biological father.
Anonymous
5/2/19, 4:09 PM
What do you mean it worked? It's perfectly normal to cum on your friends and to get your friends to cum on you, and to give friends presents, or to become friends with people who give you presents. Everything is the way it has always been. :P
Anonymous
5/2/19, 3:59 PM
keep going!!!! Keep going!!!!!
Anonymous
5/2/19, 3:32 PM
I meant to see Darius as a power bottom
Anonymous
5/2/19, 3:27 PM
mmmm hot leather muscle bear