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Anonymous
5/2/19, 3:59 PM
keep going!!!! Keep going!!!!!
Anonymous
5/2/19, 3:32 PM
I meant to see Darius as a power bottom
Anonymous
5/2/19, 3:27 PM
mmmm hot leather muscle bear
Evan
5/2/19, 10:59 AM
This is masterfully executed. I loved it. Great pacing, unique approach, hot as hell. The marker on his arm and it being the catalyst to understanding his new programming was a surprisingly arousing component.
Evan
5/2/19, 9:43 AM
Love the obliviousness and control aspect. Nice job!
Anonymous
5/2/19, 7:52 AM
This was a really fun series to follow. I'm looking forward to what you come up with next.
Anonymous
5/2/19, 5:47 AM
this was surprisingly evil twist and it worked !!
Anonymous
5/2/19, 4:44 AM
Hypnothrill: "But then my second thought was that it would be fun to write a story where the protagonist THOUGHT he won in the end, but that was only because he was totally oblivious to the ways his mind was being controlled by the parasites." That is what is SOOOOO hot about your Crazy Week series, the idea that the protagonist constantly thinks he is unaffected throughout the entire process. I read the original story on which you based yours, but you added so many subtle details that made it so much hotter. I feel like every time I read it, I notice something else, which only gets me even harder. I can't wait for this one to continue!
fal.taylor@yahoo.com
5/2/19, 4:14 AM
Honestly, the way I see it, people come to this site for hot gay hypnotic stories where it's all about the submission and loss of will! I understand having a narrative is good for a story, but in the end, a lot of these stories (if not all of them) are going to be hypnotic kink stories with no "happy ending" which is what most of us are here for.
5/2/19, 3:52 AM
So the inspiration for this story was a comment that I got on the ending of "Shell Game," complaining that I didn't depict a resistance that defeated the mind-controlling parasites. And my first thought was that they didn't understand how my stories work; my protagonists never win in the end. But then my second thought was that it would be fun to write a story where the protagonist THOUGHT he won in the end, but that was only because he was totally oblivious to the ways his mind was being controlled by the parasites.