Recent Comments

Ken
5/1/19, 2:20 AM
GREAT story. Would've been nice to let it go a few more chapters. Get the background on who ended up with whom and why. Disappointed you didn't do a background on Westin (why he was caged and pierced). But all in all a great story. Can't wait to see what you come up with nex.
Robert
5/1/19, 2:09 AM
Beautifully written story... loved the characters, the set up and the resolution. Bravo.
Anonymous
5/1/19, 1:13 AM
ggreat
Anonymous
5/1/19, 12:45 AM
Creative use of Greek/Cypriot mythology to help a character achieve a happier life.
Anonymous
5/1/19, 12:25 AM
always gotta stop and immediately read whenever Touchstone posts. you just always make mind-control and forced mental changes just so COMFY.
Anonymous
5/1/19, 12:03 AM
great ending to a great story, i love that naoto just kinda ended up as gay friends with jacob and mase.
Anonymous
4/30/19, 11:49 PM
Wow! Chilling alteration of 3 obnoxious jerks! It would have been a greater punishment to let them remember how they originated. Writing is excellent - great narrative voice.
4/30/19, 11:20 PM
rI feel that the cruelty of Ritchie begs deeper insight into the narrative; what else was Devin doing/thinking to truly deserve that level of torture? How much farther was Ritchie going with this and what were his real motivations(was he bothered by event sin his past[recent or older], was he summoned to perform tis feat? ) there is a wealthof depth to be explored n thissetting...
Anonymous
4/30/19, 10:49 PM
Just coming back to this one to say Derek WIlliams has still got it
Touchstone Fan #12
4/30/19, 10:48 PM
Like a pavlovian mutt, I start perspiring and salivating at the mere mention of the word "Touchstone"; long before I get to even read beyond the first paragraph. You're an AMAZING writer, Touchstone. Thank you so much for all of your contributions made in your free time. The love and attention-to-detail you place behind every word is felt by the reader and is heavily appreciated. Thanks again for another phenomenal work!