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Jul 12, 2014
Anonymous
4/28/19, 11:01 PM
Pretty hot story! I'd love to see more like this.
Anonymous
4/28/19, 10:46 PM
Normally a huge fan of your stuff, but this was a bit 'nah'. Your transformations are normally much better done (better described). And Richie felt like an enormous douche and just plain mean/evil. Sure Devin was bit overconfident and hurt by the rejection, but not evil or hurtful towards Richie. (Plus you mention the whole 'hating twinks/feminine gays'-side of Devin's character rather late.) So I found the ending too bleak... But still a fan of many of your other stories, so keep them coming!
4/28/19, 9:47 PM
@Hypnominion We're only a third of the way through! Keep reading!
Anonymous
4/28/19, 9:32 PM
I love this story!! would live to see another chapter!
4/28/19, 9:01 PM
This tale's unexpected turn of events is well worth the wait.More, please!!
Martin
4/28/19, 8:45 PM
@Anon: > If white supremacists start making lots of obviously racist stories on here, I think that would be a line too far. I would be really surprised if Elan was a white supremacist, being colored himself. But as I've said many times in this comment section (which you obviously only scanned at best), I'll not allow any racist mindset here in GaySpiralStories, rest assured.
tiny tim
4/28/19, 8:33 PM
Almost 'Hot' , but what's with giving Devin a BIG dick ??? Some of us find a 'nelly', fem. type twink sexy, but they should fit the stereotype, along with their lisp & exaggerated female movements , they should have a truly little [perhaps, 2" or so] 'pee-pee'.....Now on the other-hand, a nice big butt is in order !!!
Anonymous
4/28/19, 8:20 PM
this is sooo hot! please continue
Apr 28, 2019
IvorySilk
4/28/19, 8:18 PM
This was well written, great job!
Shinysmartass
4/28/19, 7:35 PM
This was very well written though as a non-native speaker, I found it quite difficult to read in parts. I understand why you wrote it this way. Clearly, you know how to write. This story was exceptional but I would like to read more from you with the language toned down a little.