Recent Comments

Apr 28, 2019
Anonymous
4/28/19, 5:08 PM
I give you credit for having the story in your head and writing as you perfected in your head. What's obvious is that you also edited before you posted. It was a polished piece of writing that you should be very proud of. I loved reading it. Hot story! Hot concept!
Anonymous
4/28/19, 3:35 PM
i do agree with all the comments... humillation, foot fetish, exposing, control over the platoon. etc... please keep it coming!
Don't be a snowflake
4/28/19, 3:26 PM
there are all kinds of fucked up shit here and raceplay triggers some people? so be it then. author, keep making more stories like this please.
Apr 28, 2019
Anonymous
4/28/19, 2:57 PM
Excellent work Thanks
SirD
4/28/19, 2:45 PM
loved that chapter!!!!
Apr 18, 2019
David S
4/28/19, 2:08 PM
I love your alien corruption stories! Haven't we all dreamed of being able to grow tentacles that can take over a big studly man?? I know I have. :) Thank you for generous contribution of another great story!
Anonymous
4/28/19, 1:49 PM
I have eagerly been waiting for you to get back to this excellent series. I hope new installments will be forthcoming soon and regularly.
ForgottenCradle
4/28/19, 12:56 PM
Dave is my spirit animal why settle for your best friend when you can have his dad and his whole platoon?
4/28/19, 12:51 PM
That was hot! I'm curious what comes next. Maybe public sex at the gym? There is also the potential of more men to control...
Apr 28, 2019
LongtimeFan
4/28/19, 12:51 PM
What a PHENOMENAL story! Marking the transformations with different outfits, and not calling attention to the changes themselves, is a brilliant idea. Plus it's awesome how you tie the various transformations to Ryan's personality by having him look at various women. A perfect karmic transformation, great writing, and hot images. Great job! :)