Recent Comments

Apr 28, 2019
IvorySilk
4/28/19, 8:18 PM
This was well written, great job!
Shinysmartass
4/28/19, 7:35 PM
This was very well written though as a non-native speaker, I found it quite difficult to read in parts. I understand why you wrote it this way. Clearly, you know how to write. This story was exceptional but I would like to read more from you with the language toned down a little.
Anonymous
4/28/19, 7:25 PM
I don't get why so many people on here are supporting the author. I get it -- everyone has their own kink, but not all kinks are equal. I don't have a problem with a white dom and a black sub or even with the white dom using "boy" for the black sub, but the way it was executed felt weird, given the history of the United States. If white supremacists start making lots of obviously racist stories on here, I think that would be a line too far.
Anonymous
4/28/19, 6:40 PM
What I mean is that Richie is such a douche bag. He made Devin so and yet not take responsibility. His actions has no purpose except messing others up. I guess people here expect positive praises only so they feel butt hurt when it's not?
Anonymous
4/28/19, 6:33 PM
I love it, I want more
4/28/19, 6:24 PM
I'm glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully I can get some more time to speed it up. The good news is that there is plenty more to come - there is life after Brendan.
orrinotica
4/28/19, 5:20 PM
Yea i dunno. theres one or two people that love commenting negative stuff on my stories with little or no feedback.
4/28/19, 5:14 PM
The point?
Apr 28, 2019
Anonymous
4/28/19, 5:08 PM
I give you credit for having the story in your head and writing as you perfected in your head. What's obvious is that you also edited before you posted. It was a polished piece of writing that you should be very proud of. I loved reading it. Hot story! Hot concept!
Anonymous
4/28/19, 3:35 PM
i do agree with all the comments... humillation, foot fetish, exposing, control over the platoon. etc... please keep it coming!