Been loving this series, keep it up!

Admins please remove this. This is extremely racist unlike all the other stories where blacks are reduced to their sexual organs and black dick is made out to be inherently superior and desirable. If we allow this story to stay then we'll be swamped by literal white supremacists. Just like how this site is 99% literal real-life rapists because most stories involve mental or physical rape.

Holy fuck. I'm shocked and appalled, absolutely APPALLED, to discover a morally dubious story on this site that hosts mind-control rape fantasy stories in which whites are made to fantasise about how much better black cock is, slim guys are made to accept they're just fucktoys for bigger men, families and loving relationships are broken up so the man can instead become a sexslave to another man, men and barely-legal teens are kidnapped, subjected to physical and psychological torture, drugged and brainwashed until they become nothing but slaves, thinly-veiled caricatures of current government figures are brainwashed into being raging cocksluts thirsty for dick, fathers indoctrinate their sons into becoming sexslaves, men force others into eating their shit and drinking their piss for their amusement, bosses use their position to control and turn their employees into tortured slaves for their pleasure, and people rape straight guys into "liking dick". I hope the admins will remove this story and ban everyone who's defended it so we can get away from these horrible, morally indefensible things and get back to wholesome stories about fathers raping their sons and forcefeeding them his shit so his son can become his brainwashed sexslave.

great cant wait for more white supremacy stories. Bet the next one will be about the kkk using the sheer dominance of their white heritage to enslave a whole black community while the linch anyone who resists. good to know this site is a safe space for white supremacists, neo-natzis, and the minorities who dream about being ruled by them.

excellent start.... cant wait to see what happens next.

sick idea. should be removed

REALLY HOT AND WELL WRITTEN I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

this is so well written better than endgame

Okay so, let's explain the missteps because reading the comments hypno i get the impression you weren't trying to make a racist story and can respect that. So let's see where you could have made it feel less... problematic. So the biggest one: the main character is a white supremacist. Yes i know he was black at the start, he's supposed to be evil, etc, etc. At the end of the day the voice of the narrator is that of a racist and also ends with him saying that whites should be dominant to blacks. Elan Mask's story (at least in it's current iteration as the comments suggest it may have been changed) it about a black man giving into a white dom using raceplay. And it has the black character reacting to this domination as if it's wrong but feels so right, which at least acknowledges that it is wrong and that his pleasure from it comes from the fact that it's wrong (i mean humiliation IS a fetish and this is still a sex site) Elan's story also never uses the words Aryan or negro (again at least as of right now it may have been changed idk) which maybe more accurate to character, aren't really great when it's some jackoff material. You need more time to establish that Andy is a horrible asshole before language like that doesn't just feel off putting and racist. And yeah it's apparent that Andy is a shithead sort of by that we all just KNOW racists are bad people, this is a sex story where he doms some black men. The story needs to go out of it's way to establish that Andy is a shitty person or it doesn't work with the story. Or at least not in a way that makes it sexy. Really just in general raceplay is something you want to avoid unless there's like a specific reason to or you have the time and energy to handle it with a bit more care. Basically it's just a little to amped up and had it been toned down in the racial aspects (and just for the hell of it the sub and dom elements played up a bit more cause let's face it that's the hot part) it would have been a less awkward story. But i do like some of your other stuff and want to see more of it. And now i'm gonna think about the fact i just wrote like a small essay on a porn site about how to approach race.

Thank you for writing this, Elan - art provokes reactions, not indifference. To those who feel a work's 'problematic' nature is necessarily divorced from authorship and context, I urge you to read & research "A Modest Proposal" and other Juvenalian works.