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UchihaDEMS
4/25/19, 2:26 AM
Not bad, I love big sub small top and reading about a white male dominating a black one? Thats rare here and I'm grateful you write this. The fact you are a black person helps in only to hope for more to come, without fear. That said, as Hypnothrill mentioned, a better introduced induction and mind control way or even how the protagonist end up there would have help me get in the mood.
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/25/19, 2:22 AM
Just to give some advice here. If this is satire it isn't really funny and satire has the problem where if it's not funny it just ends up being racist. So with this one, is there anyway to justify the race element of this story without stereotypes? Cause if you can't, it's probably best to just leave it out of your story.
Anonymous
4/25/19, 1:29 AM
So hot!! Loved the takeover of father and son. There's a sequel in that part of the story.
Anonymous
4/25/19, 1:28 AM
Great story, as usual!
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/25/19, 12:51 AM
i honestly dont believe there needed to be a response story for elan musks story. it was a great story though, never really read a bad hypnothrill story.
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/25/19, 12:22 AM
Yeah, missed the mark with this. I don't come here for high quality satire but hot stories. Love all your other stuff though.
Apr 24, 2019
4/25/19, 12:14 AM
Not offended at all, glad I was able to inspire someone who's consistently been a favorite of mine. One whose work motivated me to try my hand at some of my own--though perhaps in service of different interests ;-)--great work as always, and I really do appreciate your always constructive and thoughtful feedback.
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/24/19, 11:56 PM
Racist trash not worth taking the time to unpack and explain point by point
Apr 24, 2019
tiny tim
4/24/19, 11:53 PM
It's time for a reversal of this theme : Have a program which turns white guys into strong, powerful, huge-dicked black men !
4/24/19, 11:52 PM
Thank you for commenting! Right now I'm not sure if I'll continue the series. Maybe I'll do revisions for existing chapters (chapter 1-4 have been updated). ...Or not, no one reads them anyway, haha. Maybe I'll do an epilogue. Also, if season 2 happens, rest assured that Peterson will venture into multiverse. I do have several characters in mind...