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Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/25/19, 3:58 AM
Comment-bait story from a known and self-admitted comment lover, is my take. I feel that -- perhaps different from Get Out or even Elan Musk's story -- the narrator is creepy and racist, not just the characters. The way certain details or words are relished and lingered on. Didn't sit right with me.
Apr 24, 2019
4/25/19, 3:34 AM
I said the story has satirical elements, but it's primarily a horror story. A good point of comparison might be Jordan Peele's "Get Out," another horror story about race relations that intentionally uses racial stereotypes in a satirical way. I'm genuinely having trouble seeing why so many readers are describing this story as racist, so if someone could actually take "the time to unpack and explain point by point," I'd be grateful.
UchihaDEMS
4/25/19, 2:55 AM
Dads as slaves for youngsters? I'm in! Love it and would like to see more in the future.
UchihaDEMS
4/25/19, 2:26 AM
Not bad, I love big sub small top and reading about a white male dominating a black one? Thats rare here and I'm grateful you write this. The fact you are a black person helps in only to hope for more to come, without fear. That said, as Hypnothrill mentioned, a better introduced induction and mind control way or even how the protagonist end up there would have help me get in the mood.
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/25/19, 2:22 AM
Just to give some advice here. If this is satire it isn't really funny and satire has the problem where if it's not funny it just ends up being racist. So with this one, is there anyway to justify the race element of this story without stereotypes? Cause if you can't, it's probably best to just leave it out of your story.
Anonymous
4/25/19, 1:29 AM
So hot!! Loved the takeover of father and son. There's a sequel in that part of the story.
Anonymous
4/25/19, 1:28 AM
Great story, as usual!
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/25/19, 12:51 AM
i honestly dont believe there needed to be a response story for elan musks story. it was a great story though, never really read a bad hypnothrill story.
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/25/19, 12:22 AM
Yeah, missed the mark with this. I don't come here for high quality satire but hot stories. Love all your other stuff though.
Apr 24, 2019
4/25/19, 12:14 AM
Not offended at all, glad I was able to inspire someone who's consistently been a favorite of mine. One whose work motivated me to try my hand at some of my own--though perhaps in service of different interests ;-)--great work as always, and I really do appreciate your always constructive and thoughtful feedback.