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Apr 24, 2019
4/25/19, 12:14 AM
Not offended at all, glad I was able to inspire someone who's consistently been a favorite of mine. One whose work motivated me to try my hand at some of my own--though perhaps in service of different interests ;-)--great work as always, and I really do appreciate your always constructive and thoughtful feedback.
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/24/19, 11:56 PM
Racist trash not worth taking the time to unpack and explain point by point
Apr 24, 2019
tiny tim
4/24/19, 11:53 PM
It's time for a reversal of this theme : Have a program which turns white guys into strong, powerful, huge-dicked black men !
4/24/19, 11:52 PM
Thank you for commenting! Right now I'm not sure if I'll continue the series. Maybe I'll do revisions for existing chapters (chapter 1-4 have been updated). ...Or not, no one reads them anyway, haha. Maybe I'll do an epilogue. Also, if season 2 happens, rest assured that Peterson will venture into multiverse. I do have several characters in mind...
Anonymous
4/24/19, 11:43 PM
People's reactions here are rather comical. This is a site that has been talking about enslaving and raping men of all legal age, size, and color for years, kidnaps and destroys families, yet no one seemed to be offended by the permeating amoral elements, and suddenly when there's race-play involved people went banana. The idea of controlling people, force them to commit sexual acts against their normal self, is an evil idea on its own, but that's ok, because this is fantasy, a way to relieve sexual desires without hurting actual people. Stories on this site are fantasies, i.e., whatever turns people on (usually the authors). If the author as a black person enjoyed racial play, with a warning at the front to protect people, why can't he post it? You don't like it, don't read it. Seriously, this fuss is as ridiculous as straight folks complained about gay contents on Rul34, when the thumbnail clearly depict homo-erotic content. And for those who said the story is inappropriate because it relives the slavery history, you clearly don't know there are black people who actually enjoys serving a white-dom, and there are women who enjoys a male-dom and write stories about it, are you going to cry about how it relives the history of men-abusing-women? -------- Now to the story. I appreciate Elan for this story, because it's rare and particularly humiliating due to the aforementioned slavery-reminder, which would be hot for those who're into it. However, if it's your goal to emphasize the racial-play, I'd write more about Brysen's appearance, perhaps with emphasis on stereotypical African features, and his inner struggle involving his family's teaching (would make it beyond personal).
Apr 24, 2019
4/24/19, 11:43 PM
I hope some of the people complaining in the above comments take a chance to read the story a second time, because the mind control elements are not subtle. I'm actually not sure how I could have made them any clearer, short of writing "Because the evil racist mind-controlling app was making him think this way" after every other line.
Apr 24, 2019
LongtimeFan
4/24/19, 10:38 PM
Hypnothrill, you are a GENIUS. I disagree with the above poster: this story is a great piece of satire! First and foremost, it clearly addresses the racist thoughts as falsely implanted (and false in general). Secondly, it goes to extremes to make its satirical points (Swift said that satire is taking a silly idea to its logical conclusions)--Andre/Andy becomes a hyper-exaggerated parody of White supremacy, while Bryan becomes a hyper-exaggerated nameless "black body". We recognize the ideas as ludicrous and laugh at them, *because* they are presented as inherently wrong and silly. And finally--and Martin, I want to echo Hypnothrill's comments of respect and admiration for your work on this site--the addition of the "Don't make it about race" character is the icing on the cake (although Hypnothrill, I *might* change his name, because to name Martin directly feels like an insult). The presence of that character--the "well-meaning" person who enforces racial bias by ignoring race entirely--rockets the work to a new level. No, I didn't find it sexy--but I don't think that's the point. Cheers to Hypnothrill for this, Elan for the initial story and debate, and Martin for moderating! :)
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/24/19, 10:10 PM
So... to counteract a story with half-baked mind control elements and major racial overtones we’ve got a story with mind control elements that are probably even less-baked and racial overtones which are just as strong (albeit in the name of “satire”) Normally I love your stuff, Hypnothrill, but in terms of a “response” story I hate to say it but this feels like a swing and a miss...
Elm
4/24/19, 9:50 PM
xD okay maybe I got a bit too much into it. Sorry about that! Just enjoy the stories! they are free haha.
Apr 24, 2019
Anonymous
4/24/19, 9:48 PM
Having trouble getting past how racist this is