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ForgottenCradle
4/24/19, 6:11 PM
already loved the start, can only hope there will be more this should happen to all of my friends dads
4/24/19, 5:49 PM
I am open to feedback, but reading and taking it on board doesn't necessarily mean I change anything. It's one story, and one I seem to feel the least strongly about of anyone here. I do think you're right on one score though, a content warning should probably be added. People shouldn't be forced to read anything they don't want without warning, nor write anything they don't want for anyone other than themselves.
Elm
4/24/19, 5:44 PM
Hi there. I really liked this story, too bad many people will jump on you for this, I think it's interesting and different. Besides America isn't the world, and whatever racial thing you guys got going on doesn't mean much to everyone else on earth. People do horrible things to each other regardless of race. Stories like this are just words, they cant hurt anyone. (I love your work Elan! hope to see more from you!)
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
4/24/19, 5:35 PM
in regards to the man formed out of his cum / DNA, I have to assume it is a duplicate of himself to be sent back and take his place on earth and help recruit more men to join the source ? If he himself is permanently bonded, he cant exactly return to earth
4/24/19, 5:19 PM
@ElanMusk The only point i want to discuss here is the "because this is about mind controlling men, you can't get upset about anything else." We've all universally agreed that not everyone shares the same kinks, which is why we tag our stories. Just because someone is into mind control (and i mostly come here for the transformation), doesn't mean they're ok with everything, such as hard vore or rape. Everyone has a different bar for what they are willing to accept. More than a year ago i started writing a story where a Jewish man turned an Arab-American Muslim into his pup, titled "Arab Dog". This was actually a request by an Arab- American Muslim man to me, a Jewish man. i never finished it because i was lazy. But the plan was to make sure that the narrative itself didn't support any problematic ideas, and to post a disclaimer before the story, to let everyone know what was going on and that i didn't support the ideas within and that it was written for a specific person and their kink. Even then, if someone was offended by it, i think that's their right and my job to listen to them. honestly, I'm glad i never finished it. So maybe there is something in this story. Maybe a disclaimer or rewriting it so that the narrative doesn't support what are still common dog whistles. But you're not going to get there if you write it off as "they don't complain about these other stories" (people do), or ignore the feedback you are getting.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
4/24/19, 5:16 PM
i definitely enjoyed Carlos is a lucky lad to have been given such a delightful job
4/24/19, 5:02 PM
I just wrote something that turned me on. It honestly wasn't that deep. Just consider my one and only point: every fetish here is problematic. We are here to explore those. One of mine are unexplained hypnotic forces, that change is in ways and for reasons left indefinite and to hypnothrill's point, perhaps the execution there suffered. Appreciate the discourse though!
Martin
4/24/19, 4:49 PM
LongtimeFan: Please [find your posting in the forum](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/inversed-racism/886/4?u=martin). Please continue the discussion there, too.
steve10185@hotmail.com
4/24/19, 4:37 PM
Very well written. Personally I'd love a twist where the DVD gets in the wrong hands, perhaps with Kyle being intercepted in a suggestible state and inadvertently being turned into a dominant himself before Dave gets a chance to take control....
Anonymous
4/24/19, 4:26 PM
tbh it could've been much worse, if we'd seen some n-words being thrown around in the story that would've been a real bad time