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4/24/19, 1:16 PM
I personally didn't care for this story either, mainly because there wasn't enough emphasis on the mind control, so it often seemed as though Brysen's submission to his white racist master came "naturally" to him. But I do defend Elan's right to post this here. If some of us don't like it, then maybe we could devise ways to rewrite the narrative, to imagine anti-racist ways of telling race play stories. I've got some ideas of my own, and hopefully I'll have a response story to post in the next few days.
Anonymous
4/24/19, 1:03 PM
this is pretty fucked up and stupid, you should delete it
4/24/19, 11:41 AM
Loving this! I hope we get some future installments where Dave convinces Bobby to share the porn DVD with some of the soldiers on the base (and eventually with his son Kyle).
Evan
4/24/19, 9:59 AM
At the risk of repeating myself, I always leap on a new chapter of this series and love it. This is a great addition. Looking forward to more awesome sex, clueless submission and sex-zombies, and some revelations.
4/24/19, 9:16 AM
I really want to love this series, because alien parasite assimilation stories really turn me on (as anyone who's read my "Nuthuggers" or "A New Crop" series can tell). But I'm really having trouble getting into it, because all the characters are so flat. If we get no sense of who they were before their alien takeover, then why should we care about their transformation? I'm hoping that in the next section, we slow down a little and get more description from the perspective of the villagers.
Anonymous
4/24/19, 8:52 AM
I was offended and horrified by this story and yet simultaneously hard as a rock as I read it.
Anonymous
4/24/19, 7:29 AM
Hope to see more.
TheOne
4/24/19, 6:00 AM
I'm sure you could make even chastity hot in this series. it is nice to get a longer sex scene this chapter. Would you consider adding some perspective from the other players? For instance, my fav, Hudson is taking cock left and right. Maybe he could be wondering about cum in his ass after practice or perhaps some version of the drug lingers in his system so he seeks out other sex but in the middle if the act his senses return and he's emberassed. whatever you do, thanks fir your consistent updates!
Anonymous
4/24/19, 5:23 AM
This was one of the first stories I read on "NCMC", the original site. It was hot then and hotter years later.
4/24/19, 1:36 AM
Great! I love the congratulatory cum scene. And the hotel scene with the four was awesome.