Recent Comments

4/22/19, 5:58 PM
I agree with Bimarguy; the story would be great as a race against time...
Matt
4/22/19, 5:29 PM
If it could be pulled off that'd be a pretty awesome Discord idea yeah. Another great entry into this series btw! I love a good twinkification, and you produce some amazing examples of them.
Anonymous
4/22/19, 5:19 PM
Please continue this great story.
screamingmoist
4/22/19, 4:59 PM
Glad you enjoy them! There are probably worse ways you could end up than as Hunter in this story.
Anonymous
4/22/19, 4:27 PM
hot and sexy! great job
Apr 22, 2019
Anonymous
4/22/19, 4:26 PM
very hot and sexy. great job, thanks!
Apr 22, 2019
4/22/19, 3:05 PM
Good story. I like the struggle at the beginning and how the brother comes to help the father. Please continue, there is so much potential there. What happens at school or with the friends of both the boys and the father?
Apr 22, 2019
Anonymous
4/22/19, 2:14 PM
I'm hard.
Apr 22, 2019
4/22/19, 1:52 PM
I'm glad you liked the story, Hypnojock18, but don't hold your breath for an exposition-filled sequel. That's actually one of my pet peeves; I don't like stories where the action stops to provide elaborate explanations of how the mind control works. Where does the infection come from? From the mind of a very horny author, of course! So you might as well say it comes from "outer space," because it originates from outside the universe in which the story is set.
Apr 22, 2019
Bigdream
4/22/19, 1:25 PM
This is hot