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Anonymous
4/22/19, 4:27 PM
hot and sexy! great job
Apr 22, 2019
Anonymous
4/22/19, 4:26 PM
very hot and sexy. great job, thanks!
Apr 22, 2019
4/22/19, 3:05 PM
Good story. I like the struggle at the beginning and how the brother comes to help the father. Please continue, there is so much potential there. What happens at school or with the friends of both the boys and the father?
Apr 22, 2019
Anonymous
4/22/19, 2:14 PM
I'm hard.
Apr 22, 2019
4/22/19, 1:52 PM
I'm glad you liked the story, Hypnojock18, but don't hold your breath for an exposition-filled sequel. That's actually one of my pet peeves; I don't like stories where the action stops to provide elaborate explanations of how the mind control works. Where does the infection come from? From the mind of a very horny author, of course! So you might as well say it comes from "outer space," because it originates from outside the universe in which the story is set.
Apr 22, 2019
Bigdream
4/22/19, 1:25 PM
This is hot
Apr 22, 2019
Hypnojock18
4/22/19, 1:14 PM
This was different. I really liked it though. Very hot and sexy. You need to write more. Telling us what has infected everyone and where it came from
Anonymous
4/22/19, 12:20 PM
thanks I Love it
Bimarguy
4/22/19, 11:55 AM
great story , wish that park was real . i dont know if your planning on a second part but it would be great if his buddy Dave back to park after not hearing from Chaz . pulls into lot sees what is going on and finds that Chaz is one load away from being a permanent slut
Anonymous
4/22/19, 8:43 AM
Brilliant chapter! Loved the way they preppified him whilst he was still his old self :D