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Erebus
4/21/19, 12:46 AM
Absolutely amazing :D! Love this series keep up the good work :D!
4/20/19, 9:57 PM
> I’m intrigued to see where this is heading... > You and me both! It's funny, every writer of the LEGION OF SUPER-HEROES talks about how difficult it is to juggle all the sub-plots -- with a cast as large as the LEGION, it's the only way the whole team gets exposure. As you can see, I've got several going right now -- and a MAJOR sub-plot (the seeds of which were laid -- literally -- in this episode) starts in Chapter 5. LEGION writers also complain about how the characters "take over" and command the way their stories develop -- and I've found that to be true, too. (I'll talk more about this when we get to the Val-Or chapter.) I'm three chapters ahead -- working on chapter 7 as I write this -- and I have enough material in my head for two more after that before I set the ending into motion. Now, to be honest, I know what I want to do with the ending -- and the epilogue -- though I haven't worked out all the details yet. Hopefully by the time I get there.... (fingers crossed)
New cigar boi
4/20/19, 9:49 PM
Oh, I so hope this is going to be a long runner...
Anonymous
4/20/19, 9:27 PM
continue, please
Dodger
4/20/19, 9:22 PM
I'm intrigued to see where this is heading. As always, incredible job and hot job.
Anonymous
4/20/19, 9:19 PM
I hope this continues soon
4/20/19, 8:22 PM
Awwwwwwwww~ ^w^ Thank you David!!! Your review is wonderful :) This will be a long story, we are working hard to write more. I'm really glad that my level of English is appropriate enough not to interrupt the story x3 Really English seems a difficult language to me. I've been trying to learn English for years and I've only got a basic level, and I need help translating certain parts. My native language is Spanish. I guess the unusual structures are because I translate thinking in Spanish, I write my part thinking in Spanish. Maybe that's it. Thank you very much, your words fill me with courage! I hope to publish a new chapter soon. It will be a pleasure to listen to your thoughts, if you want to share them with us. :)
Anonymous
4/20/19, 8:18 PM
another hot chapter as usual i am really looking forward to finding out who the mad genius is.
boi98229@q.com
4/20/19, 7:51 PM
OMG!!! Wow! That was the hottest story ever!! i love that scene from The Jungle Book movie where Kaa has Mowgli hypnotized, and was always a little disappointed that with help he managed to escape. With Kaa as a naga in this version, and his motivation more sexual and into establishing psychological Dominance, this story is so much hotter than the movie. Thanks so much, guys, for bringing this version alive in such a wonderfully kinky way! The way you described the gradual and uncertain shift in power was so detailed and absolutely succulent. From my point of view, the use of words and phrases due to English not being your native tongue did not distract at all from the story. Some of it had actually created wonderful word pictures which became more vivid due to its unusual structure and/or word usage, and made Kaa more foreign and exotic -- not quite so human but still so very attractive. i am very much looking forward to reading more -- which reminds me: there is another chapter waiting! Gotta go! Thank you! Thank you! ~david
Martin
4/20/19, 6:26 PM
> horrible hopefully you do not write anymore, in this time it is a true disgust to speak of ancient Egyptians and everything related to pyramids. The pyramids really are disgusting, a real shit. I hate the pyramids. This must be the weirdest comment on this site ever. Especially the rant about Native Americans being the best. If you really think that: Having a history of being discriminated (as the Native Americans have) does in no way justify to discriminate other peoples. And that's exactly what you're doing. Please keep your hate away from this site. It's not welcome! And your comment against the author and his story is even less welcome. You may criticize, but without any personal insult and not just based on your own prejudices.