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Anonymous
4/20/19, 8:18 PM
another hot chapter as usual i am really looking forward to finding out who the mad genius is.
boi98229@q.com
4/20/19, 7:51 PM
OMG!!! Wow! That was the hottest story ever!! i love that scene from The Jungle Book movie where Kaa has Mowgli hypnotized, and was always a little disappointed that with help he managed to escape. With Kaa as a naga in this version, and his motivation more sexual and into establishing psychological Dominance, this story is so much hotter than the movie. Thanks so much, guys, for bringing this version alive in such a wonderfully kinky way! The way you described the gradual and uncertain shift in power was so detailed and absolutely succulent. From my point of view, the use of words and phrases due to English not being your native tongue did not distract at all from the story. Some of it had actually created wonderful word pictures which became more vivid due to its unusual structure and/or word usage, and made Kaa more foreign and exotic -- not quite so human but still so very attractive. i am very much looking forward to reading more -- which reminds me: there is another chapter waiting! Gotta go! Thank you! Thank you! ~david
Martin
4/20/19, 6:26 PM
> horrible hopefully you do not write anymore, in this time it is a true disgust to speak of ancient Egyptians and everything related to pyramids. The pyramids really are disgusting, a real shit. I hate the pyramids. This must be the weirdest comment on this site ever. Especially the rant about Native Americans being the best. If you really think that: Having a history of being discriminated (as the Native Americans have) does in no way justify to discriminate other peoples. And that's exactly what you're doing. Please keep your hate away from this site. It's not welcome! And your comment against the author and his story is even less welcome. You may criticize, but without any personal insult and not just based on your own prejudices.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
4/20/19, 4:54 PM
Excellent transformation story. Thank you for writing and sharing it!
4/20/19, 3:11 PM
Wait, what? Somehow, a modern-day Egyptian kid named Ramses is assumed to tie into the ancient Egyptian Ramses? We see nothing of that in the story until the very end, when he's referred to as "my king", which could be taken several different ways. Maybe it's meant to say he actually *is* ancient Ramses reborn (which there's certainly some suggestion of in the story), or maybe it's nothing more than a coincidental name, and Matt's just making a play on words at the end. To the anonymous poster, I'd like to suggest to you that your hangups over ancient Egypt are just that: *your* hangups. There's no reason to take them out on anyone else. Yes, there were a lot of bad things that happened there, but there were a lot of bad things that happened throughout pretty much *every* period in human history. Slavery, serfdom, and even the modern-day upper/lower-class distinction just seems to be a division the human race is prone to making. It sucks, but it is what it is. And how you pivot all that to be about Native Americans being the best without realizing the irony of your statement is just beyond me. Saying one particular heritage is better than all the others is itself racism, no matter how you look at it.
corinthian
4/20/19, 2:56 PM
Great stuff - many thanks!
lloyd311@aol.com
4/20/19, 2:44 PM
I dunno - I kind of like pyramids : )
Anonymous
4/20/19, 1:08 PM
That was incredible. Well-written and crafted. It's going to be hot.
4/20/19, 12:57 PM
> Now that Atom, eh, Tiny Girl saw what was going on... > Tiny Girl is a take on Shrinking Violet, not the Atom (you got your DC universes mixed up) -- though I really liked the INJUSTICE LEAGUE run with the Earth-3 characters a few years ago in JUSTICE LEAGUE by Geoff Johns. Shrinking Violet is another Legionnaire I've never cared for much, especially after she became a radical lesbian. (Although I did like her as "Leviathan" in one of the reboots....)
Anonymous
4/20/19, 12:38 PM
Chad and Raul are such a sweet couple I love it! also dammit you really know how to put in a cliffhanger..