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Slave499508824
4/17/19, 3:39 AM
I got a hard on reading this chapter and didn't even touch it untill I was done. Don't forget about the bellhops I think they should be twinks with big bubble butts and full lips for sucking cocks.
4/17/19, 3:03 AM
Thanks, Derek! I thought I recognized the name -- I love some of your stories (Catch of the Day, My Roommate Gives Me Nicknames, Plus Three, The Birthday Gift), so I'm glad you like this one. You're exactly right on the idea -- it's an open canvas to explore a lot of different transformations, hopefully something for everyone. I'm definitely planning a PT for the gym (he very briefly featured in Part 3), and I hadn't thought about a spa (or Finnish sauna), but an anonymous commenter above suggested it so it's now in my Requests bin.
Derek Williams
4/17/19, 2:58 AM
Hey, this is a fun series and a good setup to explore a lot of different transformations. No worries about being busy - it takes me a month to bust out a story sometimes, between all the other parts of life! I'd suggest the hotel could have a spa, which would require a masseuse. And maybe a personal trainer at their gym. There's no way it's a gay resort without a gym.
Anonymous
4/17/19, 2:13 AM
Well now that incest is involved, one less story to continue reading...
Anonymous
4/17/19, 2:09 AM
Really cool idea for a story, and thematically rich, too. One can either choose to believe that Keith is in an overmuscled world that values the men who are different, like Keith, or that he's only seeing what he wants to see in men after the spell, and that all he needed was the confidence to enjoy it. Very awesome!
4/17/19, 1:42 AM
To the anonymous poster starting with "Love your stories!"— Thanks! As noted, I'm fine taking suggestions, though the first one is something I might have trouble with since that is quite far from my "thing," and it's hard to write topics one isn't really into. Tattoos will definitely feature later, as will slim, but I hadn't thought of the hipster look. Viking-type sounds good. I was in Iceland last year, loved it, and so maybe an Icelandic guy morphing to that would do the trick. To the anonymous poster starting with "Thanks for the story ..."— Thanks! I wasn't sure if the detailed notes were good or bad, so it's good to know that someone likes them. Asian and likes bears ... you definitely lucked out for the first couple! The next few might not be your thing, but I will try to revisit them. I'm glad you didn't find the Asian guy's exposition offensive, it's really hard to write about races without doing stereotypes that can be really offensive to people.
Anonymous
4/17/19, 12:45 AM
Thanks for the story, very good read and trying to do things differently, I do appreciate the author notes to go into some of the thinking of different story choices. As an asian that likes bears the I've really enjoyed all the parts so far and I look forward to reading more.
4/17/19, 12:43 AM
The story flowed and the events deve,oped in am organic manner, athough I'm not a fan of giant butt growth tropes, personally, this one was a lot of fun.
Anonymous
4/17/19, 12:33 AM
those are good ideas too
Anonymous
4/17/19, 12:14 AM
Love your stories! Really curious about the next parts! (And if I might dare to make a suggestion: how about a handsome hipster (hairy, slender, beard, tattoos, skinny jeans, ...) to serve the guests coffee in the morning? Or a viking-type guy for a finnish sauna?)