Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/16/19, 4:13 AM
Loved the new development about his dad being his husband. would love to see a third chapter. maybe even do one of the past, where you see how their relationship started/changed... thanks for the story
4/16/19, 3:43 AM
This has been a wild ride with a comforting, hopeful conclusion; to quote Mr. Garcia, "what a long, strange trip it's been".
4/16/19, 3:16 AM
BOM,BOM, BOMMMM....the plot thickens!
4/16/19, 2:54 AM
Lovely....and a bit dark.....me like...
4/16/19, 1:06 AM
I'm fascinated by the gradualeffectsof the product, and how the protagonists, themselves, initiated the trope, rather than having it thrust upon them or seduced into it.
4/16/19, 12:29 AM
What. An. **Incredible**twist...
Anonymous
4/16/19, 12:22 AM
Excellent work....wonderful story!!
4/16/19, 12:06 AM
That was great. I loved it.
4/15/19, 11:46 PM
My faith in your strategy was, indeed, justified. Excellent pacing and even better internal monologue. The obliviousness of Jason's mind-shift was an incredibly smart move on your part. Bravo!!
Anonymous
4/15/19, 11:30 PM
my only and I mean only problem with your stories is having to cut and paste into Google Translate which is too disruptive. It would be so much better if you could add the translation in parenthesis or have someone in the story translate