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Anonymous
4/15/19, 10:50 PM
Unless the sheep are hot, fuckable heroes
4/15/19, 10:39 PM
LongtimeFan: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. And I concur: Any time someone writes "his bodyfat was 0%" or something to that effect, it's an immediate turn off to me. 0% bf, you'd be dead. You have to have some fat for basic body function. Something you might notice in my story is that, while I clearly break rules of reality, I break them in a deliberate way that is at least consistent with my premise. I have respect for the rest of reality and try to be reasonably accurate. (A tip I heard during an interview of Isaac Azimov while talking about good vs bad sci-fi writers.)
Grant Spiral
4/15/19, 10:36 PM
Great start! Cant wait to see what comes next!
4/15/19, 8:50 PM
an excellent concept. started off great and kept getting better.
LongtimeFan
4/15/19, 8:11 PM
Fascinating chapter! I love the idea of the "Somewhere Else"--a spot beyond time and space where otherworldly beings just ARE. And the use of the "mind's mind" to showcase the mental transformations/history is a novel, fun idea (I presume that's what Jason's dream was in the last chapter). The varied transformation types and great writing have set this up as a real winner. Nice going! :D
LongtimeFan
4/15/19, 8:06 PM
Three cheers for an amazing story! The transformation was a good pace, and I liked the subtlety of Jason's brainwashing (maybe it takes a few doses of the water to fully accept it?). I also like the idea of transformations of all kinds, and ESPECIALLY writing against the "0% body fat muscle model" ideal...very damaging stereotype, that. Thanks for this great chapter!
Nov 22, 2017
Satisfied Pig
4/15/19, 7:47 PM
Great story! Just enough filth to get this pig off love all the family man loving and how stinkin Jacobs uncle and Dad was. Coincidentally, I was training my Prince Jacob to dom pigs like me that was a Great set up for this story. Let's get it Pigs
Anonymous
4/15/19, 7:34 PM
More please
Anonymous
4/15/19, 4:18 PM
Incredible!!! So hot!! I'm still hard.
furanfin
4/15/19, 3:54 PM
This concept is wonderful, I wanna read more asap!!