Recent Comments

4/15/19, 12:05 PM
> Thank you, Coach! > Now, THERE'S an honorific I haven't heard in a while!
4/15/19, 10:42 AM
Please continue!
4/15/19, 10:37 AM
How exactly is he supposed to describe all 45 men? He has plenty of time to describe each man as they change and include back stories and the like. I look forward to more.
Anonymous
4/15/19, 7:35 AM
waiting for a shy twink to become the alpha bottom personal trainer
Anonymous
4/15/19, 7:32 AM
Good Job! Liking this series, good transition!
Apr 12, 2019
Evan
4/15/19, 7:25 AM
Great story. Thanks for writing it. The cunning of the narrator making 'me' change myself to deal with the pain and intrusion is genius. And all the hotter making the victim complicit.
Anonymous
4/15/19, 7:21 AM
Great, Can't wait for more
Evan
4/15/19, 3:56 AM
Great premise with the showers and control. I was surprised by the catered reprogramming depending on the coaches' game like how wrestlers become hole lickers. Definitely a pleasant surprise and pushed my buttons. Can't wait to see this take effect on the teams.
Evan
4/15/19, 3:53 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you. LOVED the unintentional victim and how adaptive our main character was. Definitely turned the situation to his advantage. Great hypnosis usage and rewriting the subjects. So very hot. Great writing.
Anonymous
4/15/19, 12:44 AM
Insanely hot. After this I read and edged to everything you put on this site, and it was hard to keep myself from cumming the whole time.