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Anonymous
4/15/19, 12:44 AM
Insanely hot. After this I read and edged to everything you put on this site, and it was hard to keep myself from cumming the whole time.
4/15/19, 12:30 AM
Thanks for the feedback so far! I have written Part 3, it'll be up when the admin approves it (I think he's in CET, so soon after midnight in the US is when this part got approved). I'm glad y'all like the premise. I want to respond to some of the specifics: Hypnothrill & Stroppy Author: Don't worry, it'll be much slower and more gradual, but likely stick with third person. The first transformation was intended to be very quick because that's the style I wanted for the first one. As noted, I debated putting Part 3, with much more gradual changes, up with this first bit, but I wanted to see how you guys like the premise so didn't want to wait to write it. JR_Sagger: I'll put it in the queue. Stroppy Author: I hadn't thought of it from an American Gods standpoint (I actually just started to watch that show last week). I might try to work that in a bit, but it's not my focus. Mr. Knight: Yeah, the setup was rushed because I didn't want to focus on it. I wanted to set the stage so we can get to the fun stuff. And you are correct: The current idea is to have one person/change per chapter, or one type of change per chapter (e.g., why have 1 poolboy when you can have 3? and the interaction between them as they change could be interesting).
Anonymous
4/15/19, 12:23 AM
Please continue. I cannot wait to see how Andrew and David are treated at school.
4/14/19, 11:54 PM
Niiice punchline.....it seems that the poor guy s truly heading somewhere; I'm intrigued by the new character texting Our Hero. I sense a twist-a-comin'!
LongtimeFan
4/14/19, 11:44 PM
AWOOOOOOOOOGA! Hot as hell! I love the hints that the 3G is affecting everyone it touches. And that final description of the plumped-up, clothes-bursted Quent...it's painfully sexy. Thanks for an amazing story!
4/14/19, 11:01 PM
Up to a great start! The set up was a bit rushed but it leaves the sceene open for getting a protagonist on each chapter and re-tell the events from their perspective, see how long some of them go without drinking and how they change
Apr 12, 2019
Anonymous
4/14/19, 10:19 PM
I love how the subject slowly shifted his own desires to match those of the narrator. A real Mind - job!
mdlftr
4/14/19, 10:12 PM
I love the looking back perspective -- "I am from - how you say? - early version of formula. As you see, robbing me it has of the chest fur and good hair down on man parts.” He grabbed his own thick package to emphasize, and then shrugged. “But I am still - how you say here? - all man!” ALL MAN!
Mdlftr
4/14/19, 10:00 PM
Very nice build up! I had forgotten how it was for the characters in the beginning stages - very sexy! Great description of the increasing rush --- "build up in your system -- like pot!" Thank you, Coach!
4/14/19, 8:53 PM
Mdlftr! Another voice from the past! So good to see you again! I plan on posting both MILK MAN and MILK MAN 2 here on the GSS when I'm done with FanTCdude's TOYS -- I'm considering it my "Classic Absman" Series. I mean, I wrote this story in 2004. MILK MAN was my first story in 1998 -- and MILK MAN 2 was 2001/2, something like that. (I always preferred MILK MAN 2. I knew what I was doing by then -- in the original I was sort-of making it up as I went along.) Believe me, if there's an audience, I"m happy to share. I don't do any "dumbing down" in this story, but I've used it as an element in others. It's just another angle on the fetish. Interestingly, someone wrote me one time complaining that all my characters enjoy what happens to them, rather than suffer from it. Of course, to me it's impossible to imagine anyone NOT enjoying the sudden gain of 100+ pounds of muscle and hyper-masculine sexuality, even if it's forced on them. But hey... write your own story, you know? I'd love it to happen to me. Anyway, good to have you back on the comments -- I appreciate your praise very much. Have you been reading the new stuff? (KING REX 2, etc?)