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Apr 12, 2019
Anonymous
4/14/19, 10:19 PM
I love how the subject slowly shifted his own desires to match those of the narrator. A real Mind - job!
mdlftr
4/14/19, 10:12 PM
I love the looking back perspective -- "I am from - how you say? - early version of formula. As you see, robbing me it has of the chest fur and good hair down on man parts.” He grabbed his own thick package to emphasize, and then shrugged. “But I am still - how you say here? - all man!” ALL MAN!
Mdlftr
4/14/19, 10:00 PM
Very nice build up! I had forgotten how it was for the characters in the beginning stages - very sexy! Great description of the increasing rush --- "build up in your system -- like pot!" Thank you, Coach!
4/14/19, 8:53 PM
Mdlftr! Another voice from the past! So good to see you again! I plan on posting both MILK MAN and MILK MAN 2 here on the GSS when I'm done with FanTCdude's TOYS -- I'm considering it my "Classic Absman" Series. I mean, I wrote this story in 2004. MILK MAN was my first story in 1998 -- and MILK MAN 2 was 2001/2, something like that. (I always preferred MILK MAN 2. I knew what I was doing by then -- in the original I was sort-of making it up as I went along.) Believe me, if there's an audience, I"m happy to share. I don't do any "dumbing down" in this story, but I've used it as an element in others. It's just another angle on the fetish. Interestingly, someone wrote me one time complaining that all my characters enjoy what happens to them, rather than suffer from it. Of course, to me it's impossible to imagine anyone NOT enjoying the sudden gain of 100+ pounds of muscle and hyper-masculine sexuality, even if it's forced on them. But hey... write your own story, you know? I'd love it to happen to me. Anyway, good to have you back on the comments -- I appreciate your praise very much. Have you been reading the new stuff? (KING REX 2, etc?)
Anonymous
4/14/19, 7:16 PM
Where did you go clown boi?! It breaks my little villain heart when these stories stall out!
Anonymous
4/14/19, 6:32 PM
Got me hard also! Looking forward to more. I agree with the comment about descriptions both physical and mental. Wouldn't mind see racial transformations.
Stroppy Author
4/14/19, 6:28 PM
I agree with Hypnothrill. Slow it down. Give a more thorough description of the men before and after the changes. I like the premise. Reminds me of American Gods where Media appears as Lucy, Marilyn and David Bowie to deliver messages. This can be very hot!
4/14/19, 6:09 PM
Yeah, umm... I tried writing a new chapter for this. Could any of you proofread it? Here's the link: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/showSecret?secretWord=023a2535-dbca-488f-90ce-8874a853e7bb
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/14/19, 4:08 PM
This should be great! All these men being transformed to serve other men! Would be great to be one of the staff!
Anonymous
4/14/19, 3:37 PM
Can't wait to see where this goes. it sure got *me* hard already